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What contents should contain in five paragraph essay? This is a brief summary about our yesterday’s academic writing class. Please help me check the grammar mistakes in this brief summary and help me optimize the sentence structure and transition in this article if it’s possible. Thank you!

Yesterday our introduced us the five paragraph essay. It contains

Introduction&thesis :

In the introduction paragraph , you should contain a hook to catches reader’s attention. And express the thesis statement combine with examples, in most condition we restricted in 3 thesis. Also through your thesis statement , reader should find out your stance about this topic.

Body paragraph:

Body paragraph is where you explain your opinion in detail help reader to understand you statement. It should contain topic sentences which is a statement for your thesis, and this sentence should be the first sentence of the paragraph. And at the end of the paragraph , you could restate your opinion again, but a better way to do this is build transition to next paragraph.

Conclusion:

Basically you restate all your thesis again in the conclusion gives a summary to the readers help them remember your thesis better. But you better arrange it different form the way you say it in the introduction paragraph to diversify your essay.

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What contents should be contained in a five paragraph essay?

This is a brief summary about our academic writing class yesterday*. Please help me check the grammar mistakes in this brief summary and help me optimize the sentence structures and transitions in this article if it’s possible. Thank you!

Yesterday our instructor/teacher introduced us to the five paragraph essay. It contains the following types of paragraphs:

Introduction & thesis:

In the introduction paragraph, you should have** a hook to catch the reader’s attention. And express the thesis statement combined with examples, in most conditions we restricted in 3 thesis [?? "we restrict this to 3 sentences."?]. Also through your thesis statement, the reader should find out your stance about this topic.

Body paragraph:

The body paragraph is where you explain your opinion in detail to help the reader to understand your statement. It should contain a topic sentence which is a statement for your thesis, and this sentence should be the first sentence of the paragraph. And at the end of the paragraph, you could restate your opinion again, but a better way to do this is to build a transition to the next paragraph.

Conclusion:

Basically you restate all your thesis ideas again in the conclusion which gives a summary to the readers to help them remember your thesis better. But you better arrange it different from the way you say it in the introduction paragraph to diversify your essay.

[* Or: "about yesterday's academic writing class."

** Or: "The introduction paragraph should contain a hook ...".

Note that commas and colons should not have spaces before them.]

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