thanks for correct my English article You did such a great job today. You were able to adequately have the basic conversation and you introduced yourself very well. You knew the meaning of all the vocabulary and you were able to generate fantastic sentences. You correctly matched the questions with the relevant answers. You expressed yourself well. You are a pleasure to teach. 亲爱的露娜，你今天表现得真不错。你能够充分地进行基本的对话，并且很好地介绍了自己。你知道所有词汇量的含义，你就能创造出奇妙的句子。你用相关答案正确地回答问题。你表现得很好。教你是一种乐趣。 需要提高 You should aim at improving your grammar skills and sentence structure. I can see you have a nice vocabulary however to advance, try and work on your verb conjugation and talking in both past and future tense. Another thing you can work on is your reading. Ensuring you know how to read and spell the vocabulary you already know and will soon learn. 你应该致力于提高你的语法能力和句子结构。我可以看到你有一个很好的词汇量，但前进，尝试用动词结合使用过去时态和将来时态交流。你可以做的另一件事就是阅读。确保你知道如何阅读和拼写你已经知道并会很快学会的词汇。 学习建议 Keep up the great work! It is very good to see you have an interest in American TV series as this is one of the best ways to practise your language skills. Try and read the subtitles in English from now on and see how that goes! Also, try pausing the show and practising specific sentences you can use in your daily life. 继续努力学习！很高兴看到你对美国电视剧感兴趣，因为这是练习你的语言技能的最好方法之一。从现在开始试着阅读英文字幕，看看效果如何！同时，试着按暂停键，练习你日常生活中能用到的专门的句子。