I am writing on behalf of Fordham neighbourhood regarding the new car park that the town council wants to build. Having interviewing a large number of neighbours, I should express our total disappointment in that regard.

Our research have found that seventy percent of people use the park either daily or weekly, which is in our opinion, a great deal of people enjoying the park monthly.

On the other hand, there is no other place for children playing and as you know, there are a large number of them living in the area. In addition, having a park in the district creates a great benefit for all of us since the park offers quiet place to rest after a hard working day and a fresh environment to relish. Tennis courts are also rated very highly and tremendously useful for people with low incomes.

Finally, as citizens are aware of the lack of parking really well, they suggest either: demolishing the old factory close to the river to build the car park on that space, or turning the factory into a car parking building, where there will be space for more than 950 cars. To sum up, if our proposals were followed it would be a win-win situation. Our city may be a better place to live, but also a model of urbanization. Looking forward to our suggestions being heard.

Yours faithfully, A citizen

A letter for the Newspaper

Bien hecho. la mayoria de los cambios son para mejorar la fluidez, no para corregir errors. Tal vez, car park es un anglicismo; en este caso lo siento por una correcion innecesario pero en eeuu no lo decimos asi.