First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am vivian, 24 years old now. from HunNan proviness.

I have worked about 4 years, which acted as a business sales. In my daily work, i need to use English to write email & talk business quite ofen. But i think i have to improve my oral English, So i want to find some friends to chat, we could talk our daily life, our work, our hometown, etc.

Hi Vivian, below is my version looking at your note, please do tell how is it. Thank you.

I have been working for 4 years now in business sales. In my daily activities, I need to use English quite often to write an email and also using it for business discussion. But I think I have to improve my English conversation, so I would like to find some friends who can chat with me, we can talk about our daily life, our work, our hometown, etc.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am vivian, 24 years old now, from HunNan province.

I have worked for 4 years as a                    (do you mean a saleswoman?) In my daily work, i need to use English in writing emails & talking business quite often. But i think i have to improve my English oral skills. So i want to find some friends to chat with, we can talk about our daily life, our work, our hometown, etc.