Independent writing #1
Dormitory living is very popular among freshman students who are going to start their journey in a foreign country. According to the Ministry of Science, Research and Technology, for the year ending 2017, the average number of students in dormitories was more than 50 percent which increased 5% over the year ending 2016. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed bring us to the moot question as to whether living in a dormitory can provide more advantages than off-campus housing. The popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that living in dormitories can provide some advantages. This is because they teach students how to treat the other people in big communities, provide various public facilities and provide a congenial circumstance to find new friends. I will try to put forward below a number of cogent reasons for living in the dormitory according to which I think are the most common viewpoints nowadays.
First of all, living in the dormitory can pave the way for acquiring new insights to make students autonomous and open up a whole gamut of new pragmatic experiences to intensify their sense of responsibility toward their social life. As a case in point, when I started my bachelor program at the university I wasn’t really tidy and never had I cleaned my room before. Living in a/the dormitory area forced me to be a neat and tidy guy. Admittedly, I was somewhat shy and tried to do my best to show myself as a gentleman in front of my roommates. This can at least partly explain why living in the dormitory can make students take on the burden of their housing rules and can be profitable for them becoming a prosperous person in the future.
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Dormitory living is very popular among freshman students, who are going to start their journey in a foreign country. According to the Ministry of Science, Research and Technology, for the year ending 2017, the average number of students in dormitories was more than 50 percent, which had increased by 5% since the year ending 2016. Various points of view, which are germane to the matter being discussed, bring us to the moot question as to whether living in a dormitory can provide more advantages, than off-campus housing. The popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling to is that living in dormitories can provide some advantages. This is because they teach students how to treat the other people in big communities, provide various public facilities and provide a congenial circumstance to find new friends. I will try to put forward below a number of cogent reasons for living in the dormitory according to which I think are the most common viewpoints nowadays.
First of all, living in the dormitory can pave the way for acquiring new insights to make students autonomous and open up a whole gamut of new pragmatic experiences to intensify their sense of responsibility toward their social life. As a case in point, when I started my bachelor program at the university I wasn’t very tidy and never had I cleaned my room before. Living in a dormitory area forced me to be a neat and tidy guy. Admittedly, I was somewhat shy and tried to do my best to show myself as a gentleman in front of my roommates. This can at least partly explain why living in the dormitory can make students take on the burden of their housing rules and can be profitable for them becoming a prosperous person in the future.
First of all, living in the dormitory can pave the way for acquiring new insights to make students autonomous and open up a whole gamut of new pragmatic experiences to intensify their sense of responsibility toward their social life. As a case in point, when I started my bachelor program at the university I wasn’t very tidy and never had I cleaned my room before. Living in a dormitory area forced me to be a neat and tidy guy. Admittedly, I was somewhat shy and tried to do my best to show myself as a gentleman in front of my roommates. This can at least partly explain why living in the dormitory can make students take on the burden of their housing rules and can be profitable for them becoming a prosperous person in the future.
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Independent writing #1
Dormitory living is very popular among freshman students who are going to start their journey in a foreign country. According to the Ministry of Science, Research and Technology, for the year ending 2017, the average number of students in dormitories was more than 50 percent, a 5% increase over the year ending 2016. Differing views on the matter ask whether living in a dormitory is better than off-campus housing. The popular sentiment, to which I vehemently cling, is that living in dormitories provides some advantages. They teach students how to treat others in the community, provide various public facilities and a congenial circumstance to find new friends. I try to put forward below some cogent reasons for living in the dormitory according to which I think are the most common viewpoints nowadays.First of all, dorm living paves the way to make students autonomous and opens up a whole gamut of new pragmatic experiences to intensify their sense of responsibility toward their social life. As a case in point, when I started my bachelor program at the university I wasn’t really tidy and I had never cleaned my room before. Living in the dormitory area forced me to be neat and tidy. Admittedly, I was somewhat shy and tried to do my best to show myself as a gentleman in front of my roommates. This can at least partly explain why dorm life can make students take on the burden of their housing rules and can profit them to become a prosperous person in the future.
very well written!
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Secondly, the other benefit of living in the campus is that there are various public facilities on campus which are accessible for students to spend their leisure times on such as going to the pool, watching movies in the cinema, practicing in the gym and best use of the completely quiet library in the exam season. To take a personal experience as an example, when I was working on my Ph.D. thesis I went to the computer site and started net surfing by use of a high speed internet and I could connect to the net each part of a day; besides, I could use university accounts to access lots of scientific websites which charged high fees for individual usage. To highlight the importance of living in a/the dormitory it should be noted that you can use all of the aforementioned well-equipped facilities for free or at a huge discount.
Finally, living on the campus has a lot of social advantages, for example, you can participate in various free or low-paid workshops and make new friends. You can see a lot of different students with different cultures and study them in terms of manners, habits, and lifestyles which can be useful for the future in life. For instance, if you have adequate information about any ethnicities regarding their lifestyle you can broaden your communication with them in the future. A/The dormitory provides you a congenial situation to expand your constructive communication relationships with a blend of different people.
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It can be deduced from a combination of a breadth of coverage and depth of detail that choosing campus life may provide students a more comfortable life rather than off-campus living. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points worth reiterating: firstly, a/the campus disciplines your lifestyle; secondly, it provides students with some public facilities; and finally, you can find new friends easily. Last but not least, it is highly recommended to spend at least one semester there to obtain the experience of a new method of living in a congenial environment, and I’m sanguine about this experience which can be laudable.
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