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IELTS writing task When people visit other countries, some people think that they should follow local customs and behaviour, but others think that the host countries should welcome cultural differences. There is different culture in different countries. Japanese are quiet when they are taking the train, they won't speak loudly because they think it is rude to other people. In Taiwan, people was taught that young people should yield the seat to elder or those people who are pregnant or injury. Western people always let lady first. People travel to other countries in order to see the different views and also to experience the different cultures. On the other hand, the vistors bring their cultures to the place they visited, this make the different cultures exchange. No matter what cultures it is, people should respect all the cultures. In my opinion, people travel to other countries to learn different cultures so people should follow the local customs and behaviour. This is a easy way to experience the local life. If the vistors remain their customs, travelling to other countries will be meanless. However, the host country should welcome cultural differences and show respect, but they should try to protect their own culture, too. If the culture disappear, all countries will be same, and travel to other countries will be no meaning. People should show respect to different cultures and try to protect all cultures in the world. Because of the different cultures, travelling is more interesting and full of meaning.

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IELTS writing task

When people visit other countries, some people think that they should follow local customs and behaviour, but others think that the host countries should welcome cultural differences.

There is different culture in different countries. Japanese are quiet when they are taking the train, they won't speak loudly because they think it is rude to other people. In Taiwan, people was are taught that young people should yield their seat to the elderly or those people who are pregnant or injuryed. Western people always let ladyies sit first. People travel to other countries in order to see the different views and also to experience the different cultures. On the other hand, the visitors bring their cultures to the place they visited, this make the different cultures exchange. No matter what cultures it is, people should respect all the cultures.

In my opinion, people travel to other countries to learn different cultures so people should follow the local customs and behaviour. This is an easy way to experience the local life. If the visitors remain maintain their customs, travelling to other countries will be meaningless. However, the host country should welcome cultural differences and show respect, but they should try to protect their own culture, too. If the culture disappears, all countries will be same, and travel to other countries will be no meaning pointless.

People should show respect to different cultures and try to protect all cultures in the world. Because of the different cultures, travelling is more interesting and full of meaning.

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