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Lola, my best friend! Today I would like to write about my best friend and how she makes me happy every day! Her name is Lola and she's a very cute dog! She is eleven years old in human age, she's an old lady! I really like to spend my time with her because she's smart, loyal and very friendly! Every time I'm upset or in bad days, she makes me cheerful with your beautiful eyes! She likes to get with my grandfather and follow him to everywhere! It's very funny! We usually say she is his shadow, hahaha Sometimes, in the afternoon, she usually stay in my room where she likes to lay in my carpet and sleep while I pet her on her fluffy fur! She likes to barking on the balcony to others dogs who pass on the streets. I bet she thinks that it's really brave, but when I walk down with her, she prefer to play with them, hahaha and smell them! Lola is very sweet! When she's see her dog-collar, she jumps of joy and bite my pants so we can go out more fast! She is here with me and my family five years ago and full our lives with love and gratitude! This little human being are really special, don't you think? I've always wanted a little dog, but my grandmother doesn't like the ideia because they make a lot of mess, but Lola is so meek! I've never seen a dog like her! Everything she wants is affection, care and love! And love her very much!! Ps: Is "dog-collar" correct? Or it's just "collar"?

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Lola, my best friend!

Today I would like to write about my best friend and how she makes me happy every day!

Her name is Lola and she's a very cute dog! She is eleven years old in human age, she's an old lady!
I really like to spend my time with her because she's smart, loyal and very friendly! Every time I'm upset or in having a bad days, she makes me cheerful with your her beautiful eyes! She likes to get be with my grandfather and follow him to everywhere! It's very funny! We usually say she is his shadow, hahaha

Sometimes, in the afternoon, she usually stays in my room where she likes to lay in on my carpet and sleep while I pet her on her fluffy fur! She likes to barking on the balcony to others dogs who pass on the streets. I bet she thinks that it's really brave, but when I walk down with her, she prefers to play with them, hahaha and smell them!

Lola is very sweet! When she's see her dog-collar, she jumps of with joy and bites my pants so we can go out more faster! She is here with me and my family for five years ago and full fills our lives with love and gratitude!

This little human being are is really special, don't you think? I've always wanted a little dog, but my grandmother doesn't like the ideia idea because they make a lot of mess, but Lola is so meek! I've never seen a dog like her! Everything  The only thing she wants is affection, care and love!

And love her very much!!

Ps: Is "dog-collar" correct? Or it's just "collar"?


Nice job! And you can say both, for example you can say "Does that dog have a dog collar?" or "Does that dog have a collar?" but when you just say collar, it does not always mean a dog collar.

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Maybe you should also be aware that "dog collar" has a second slang meaning, as the special kind of collar work by clergy, by church people. http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/magazine/7136299.stm

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