Singing Like in the Old Days
It's not that actually she doesn't sing (in the shower at least), but that she doesn't do it like when we were in college. In those days she didn't have any kind of problem about singing in public, in fact she had so much willingness that she was always looking to participate in any kind of public spectacle where she could spread her beautiful voice without any restriction or shame. It's awful how nowadays she doesn't sing even with her close friends... I had to do something, so I enrolled her in the next Community Talent Show to sing her favorite song; she doesn't now yet, but she's going to do it. I want her to be as happy as she was in the old days.
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I'm a bit confused regarding the first sentence. In line 6 you say she doesn't sing at all, but in line two the phrase 'that she doesn't do it like when we were in college' seems to imply that she does sing, however, not the way she did. I think you should rewrite the first sentence and make it more clear.
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