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Im going to talk about myself a little bit today. I was born in Hokkaido and raised up there. I was working in Japan for three years after graduating from the university. And last year I lived in Canada for around a year which had been my dream since I was a university student. I was so happy to be there and really enjoyed that time. I went to a school to get license to teach English for kids and I actually taught English to Egyptian children. So through the life in Canada, Ive realized that I always feel happy when I use English or talking to foreigners. Actually Ive been trying to be flight attendant since I came back to Japan, but Ive realized that I want to focus on teaching conversational English. I would like to tell Japanese that English is fun and its the most amazing part to be able to understand foreigners. Im looking forward to meet you! Thank you.
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Im going to talk about myself a little bit today. I was born in Hokkaido and raised up there. I was working in Japan for three years after graduating from the university. Last year I lived in Canada for around a year which had been my dream since I was a university student. I was so happy to be there and really enjoyed that time. I went to a school to get licensed to teach English for kids. I actually taught English to Egyptian children. So through the life in Canada, I've realized that I always feel happy when I use English or am talking to foreigners. I have been trying to become a flight attendant since I came back to Japan, but I've realized that I want to focus on teaching conversational English. I would like to tell Japanese people that English is fun and its the most amazing part to be able to understand foreigners. Im looking forward to meet you! Thank you.
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Could you correct this plz?
Im I'm going to talk about myself a little bit today. I was born in Hokkaido and raised up there. I was working worked in Japan for three years after graduating from the university. And last year I lived in Canada for around a year which had been my dream since I was a university student. I was so happy to be there and really enjoyed that time. I went to a school to get license licensed to teach English for kids, and I actually taught English to Egyptian children. So through the life in Canada, Ive I've realized that I always feel happy when I use English or talking (OR "when I'm talking") to foreigners. Actually I've been trying to be flight attendant since I came back to Japan, but I've realized that I want to focus on teaching conversational English. I would like to tell Japanese that English is fun and it's the most amazing part to be able to understand foreigners. I'm looking forward to meet you! Thank you.Thank you for sharing! Your English is great. I made some grammatical corrections and some English-style word-use corrections. Let me know if you have any other questions :)
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