My challenge (my own book in English) Ego. C1\P1 I've come to realize what learning English must be challenged and more fun for everyone! Most of all challenging for me and fun for correctors ;) A very long time I'm coming up an idea of Sci-Fi setting and it was gonna be a manga (I made storyboards for manga and my friend artist intend to draw manga). But I think that it will be best for me to write a book (too strong a word)! Since my writing skills are terrible (even in native language), but I believe may be at end of the book I can do improves, of course with your help! Sorry if reading this would painful for you, but I hope it will be much interesting rater yet another "my breakfast" text. So... With screaming "Comfort is the enemy of achievement!" I'm beginning the first Chapter! ** EGO ** Chapter 1. Junior Technician Sayko The teenage girl with enormous large headphones was going through a pitch black tunnel of a spaceship Cradle. She unhurriedly pushes a metal pushcart filled with colorful cylindrical containers in front of herself. She was in the maintenance tunnels of neuroprocessing block of colossal spaceship what must save humanity. Gigantic space facility what became home for last humans in the universe. Sayko is the fourth generation of colonists what goes through dark cold space to a new home. What should have been an easy and comfortable journey - become insufferable torture right after the first 40 years of the mission when many of critical systems begin failing. The yellow patch with letters "JT-NP" on Sayko's coverall says that she works as a junior technician in the neuroprocessing block of an outer segment of the facility. That was low effort work even for a fragile girl. Peering into labels on dark walls she idly searching needed section. She pulled a flashlight from a pocket and lit up the wall. The labels were blurred and faded. Suddenly, she felt someone's presence and quick turnaround and cries out, "Aaie! Gleb, you are dumbass! You scaring me! What do you think you're doing?!", she rapidly took off her headphones. Gleb smiling apologetically and said with guilt in his voice, "I try to call you, but you as always hearing nothing in this headphones!" "Now you gonna mutilate me with... this?", he pointed on stood over him Sayko's flashlight. After an awkward pause, she put the flashlight back into the pocket of the coverall. Tunnel again went to dark. (end of part 1 of chapter 1) ... Thx for attention! (>_<)