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IELTS Writing Task 2 'Immigration' essay This is an essay for the IELTS exam writing task 2. I hope someone could give me some advice on my work. Your help is greatly appreciated!!!!! SUBJECT: Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree? ESSAY: Recently, while there are more people moving overseas, some claimed that immigrants should give up their own tradition and follow local customs. I completely disagree with that and believe that people should preserve their own culture even if they migrate to other countries. First of all, people should be proud of their own culture. It is an honor to speak a native language and follow the way our ancestors do. There is no better culture and every culture should be equally respected. For instance, Ann Lee, who is a famous Taiwanese director, never abandons his old ways. Moreover, he is highly commended because of his talents. Thus, it is essential to praise your own culture no matter where you are. Secondly, although immigrants adapt to local customs and codes of behaviors, it does not make them 100 percent local people. In other words, we can still easily tell whether a person is an immigrant or not by his appearance. For instance, in spite of dying their hair or changing the wearing style, some culture or behaviors just cannot be mimicked. Therefore, people living abroad should not only copy local customs but also obey their own tradition. To sum up, I reaffirm my state that immigrants should not forget their own culture. Due to that fact that adapting to local customs does not turn immigrants to local people, instead, they should keep their tradition and be proud of it.

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