Please correct me
Hi Lena! Thank you for your long e-mail. You asked me about my holiday. So, I’d drop you a line to tell you all about it. I am in Crete. We’re staying in a big hotel by the sea.
Right now, I’m on the beach with my family. I’m relaxing and reading the book. My son is learning to scuba dive. My husband is snorkelling.
Crete is a wonderful place! We have done all sorts of exciting things. Yesterday, we rented the car and travelled the greatest part of the island. The day before we visited temples, bought handmade souvenirs and walked along narrow, cobbled streets.
Anyway, that’s all for now. Write back soon.
Love,
Nadja
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Please correct me
Hi Lena! Thank you for your long e-mail. You asked me about my holiday, so, I’m dropping you a line to tell you all about it. I am in Crete. We’re staying in a big hotel by the sea.Right now, I’m on the beach with my family. I’m relaxing and reading a book. My son is learning to scuba dive. My husband is snorkeling.
Crete is a wonderful place! We have done all sorts of exciting things. Yesterday, we rented a car and travelled the greatest part of the island. The day before we visited temples, bought handmade souvenirs and walked along narrow, cobbled streets.
Anyway, that’s all for now. Please write back soon. [This sentence is not wrong but I think it's more polite to say "please"]
Love,
Nadja
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