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Merry Christmas Have had never been alone during the Christmas since I could remember. I was either spent time with my girlfriend or with my family.

Well, it's different tonight, though it kinda gives me an opportunity to observe people walking around on the street, holding someone’s hand, looked like they were really happy.

I was sitting there, and every once in a while I could notice a couple nearby exchanging their gifts and cards, they were reading the cards with a smile on their faces, surprised by the gifts prepared by their lovers. And All of a sudden I felt great, I was really happy for them. It might be one of the best Christmas I have had in my life.

Merry Christmas:)

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Merry Christmas

I've never been alone during Christmas since I can remember. I either spent time with my girlfriend or with my family. Well, it's different tonight, though it kinda gave me an opportunity to observe people walking around on the street, holding someone’s hand, looking like they were really happy.


I was sitting there, and every once in a while I would notice a couple nearby exchanging their gifts and cards. They were reading the cards with a smile on their faces, surprised by the gifts prepared by their lovers. And all of a sudden I felt great, I was really happy for them. It might be one of the best Christmas I have had in my life.

Merry Christmas :)

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Thank you for your suggestion:)
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Hiya, it's a nice story you wrote here. I'm an English learner as well. I only want to give one suggestion. "Kinda" is a colloquial expression, in written form you can write it as "kind of". 寫得很生動。

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