Could you check this entry and point out any mistakes. Thanks a lot.
I went to Phuket with my kid last summer. We had very happy time by Patong Beach. My kid was very excited because being a kid who lives in a inland city it was his first time playing at the beach.
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Could you check this entry and point out any mistakes. Thanks a lot.
I went to Phuket with my kid last summer. We had very happy time by on Patong Beach. My kid was very excited because being* a kid who lives in a inland city it was his first time playing at on the beach.* this is a bit formal for this kind of text- why not - because he is a kid who
If you use it at the start it would be ok- Being a kid who lives in an inland city he was excited because it was his first time...
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