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Hiroki Kotegawa
The most memorable event The most memorable event for me is Rockin' Japan festival, which is one of the biggest music festivals in Japan, especially featuring Japanese rock music. My freind took me there four years ago and it was my first experience to join that kind of live show. I was totally impressed by many energetic performances and I also loved the atmosphere , a sense of unity among the audience. Since then, I've been such a big fan of rock music that I go to live shows more than ten times a year.
27 ก.พ. 2019 เวลา 18:03
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The most memorable event

The most memorable event for me is was the Rockin' Japan festival, which is one of the biggest music festivals in Japanespecially featuring Japanese rock music. My friend took me there four years ago and it was my first experience to join with that kind of live show. I was totally impressed by the many energetic performances and I also loved the atmosphere: a sense of unity among the audience. Since then I've been such a big fan of rock music that I go to live shows more than ten times a year.


Notes:

"The most memorable event for me is was the Rockin' Japan festival"

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