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Robotics I'm in accounting at my company and my current assignment is installing robots in order to automate the process of routine works of accounting. They are amazing. They execute their tasks way more quickly and accurately than humans do. It really helps me to reduce my overtime work but I wonder what will happen in our own jobs in the future . Though It is often said that humas can focus on works that require more creativity and imagination, considering the rapid development of artificial intelligence, who can assure we will have an edge forever? Maybe one possibility is to become a parent of robots and manipulate them. As I appreciate the contribution of robots righ now, I should stop being so pessimistic .

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Robotics

I'm in accounting at my company and my current assignment is installing robots in order to automate the process of routine accounting tasks. They are amazing. They execute their tasks way more quickly and accurately than humans do. It really helps me to reduce my overtime work, but I wonder what will happen to our own jobs in the future . Though It is often said that humans can focus on tasks that require more creativity and imagination, considering the rapid development of artificial intelligence, who can ensure that we will have an edge forever? Maybe one possibility is to become a parent of robots and manipulate them. As I appreciate the contribution of robots right now, I should stop being so pessimistic .


Nearly perfect writing, Hiroki. There were a couple of corrections that I believe were problem due to simple typos. 

The verb to assure takes a person as direct object, e.g. "assure us," or "assure me." Since you didn't have one in that sentence, I suggest the verb to ensure, which in this sentence has the following clause (that we will have an edge forever) as its direct object.

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