My birthday

Today, I want to introduce  talk/write about my birthday. I was born in Binh Dinh province, 17th March, 1996. I just turned 23 years old. Today is my birthday 23rd time my 23rd birthday. Every year ,M my birth day will be is organized with my familys and my friends . We will have a small party together. (It would sound better to combine the last two sentences to say "Every year on my birthday, my family and friends organize a small party" or "Every year, I get together with my family and friends to celebrate my birthday")
Someone will give some gift for me  give me a gift. That is feelings that they give for me. (This sentence I don't understand.) I will go out with my friends in on my birthday, and we will eat together, and drink a little beer.,.. (Instead of "and" here, you could start a new sentence. We will eat together, and drink beer.") The birthday will have a lot of things, as same balloon, birthday cake,candle, ice cream cake,.. (It is not clear what you're referring to. Is this a different party, or still what is happening when you go out with your friends. The sentence is also phrased a little awkwardly. I would say, "At my birthday party, there will be balloons, birthday cake, candles, and ice cream.")
We will sit together after we burned light the candles, and i will wish for anything that i want. to have it and Everyone is present at the party they will sing a song "happy birthday" to me. After that, i will blow out candles and we will start a party birthday together. (This piece doesn't make sense, I'm not sure what you mean. Maybe "After I blow out the candles, the party will begin!") Throughout the party birthday (just "party" will do, otherwise if you want to specify, you would say "birthday party" , all everyone will wish me happy birthday to me , they can borrow a beer to replace congratulations for me (I don't know what you mean here. I think you haven't chosen the correct words.) and we will talk and joking joke together and ask each other about our healthy and us our jobs throughout the party. That is all my birthday

My birthday

I want to introduce myself on my birthday. I was born in Binh Dinh province, 17th of March, 1996. I have just turned 23 years of age. Today is my 23rd birthday. Every year my birthday will be organized with my family and my friends. We will have a small party together.
Someone will bring a gift for me. Those are the feelings that they give me. I will go out with my friends on my birthday, we will eat and drink a few beers together. On my birthday we will have a lot of things such as balloons, birthday cake, candles, ice cream cake,...
We will sit together after we have lit the candles and I will make a wish for anything that I want to have. Everyone present at the party will sing happy birthday to me, after that I will blow out the candles and we'll start the birthday party together. Throughout the birthday party , everyone will congratulate me on my birthday, they can treat me with a beer instead congratulating me. We will talk and joke together and inquire about our health and jobs throughout the party. This is what we do for my birthday.

My birthday

Today, I want to tell ỵou about about my birthday. I was born in Binh Dinh province,  on March 17th, 1996. I just turned 23 years old. Today is my 23rd birthday. Every year ,My birth day is organized with my family and my friends. We will have a small party together.
Someone will give me some gifts. This is how they express their feelings for me. I will go out with my friends on my birthday, we will eat together and drink a little beer.,.. At the birthday party there will be  a lot of things, such as balloon, birthday cake,candle, ice cream cake,..
We will sit together after we burned candle and i will wish anything that i want to have, and everyone present at the party they will sing the song "happy birthday to me", after that i will blow out candles and we will start the brithday party together. During the brithday party , everyone will wish me a happy birthday , they can borrow a beer to replace congratulations for me and we will talk and joke together and ask about healthy and our jobs throughout the party. That is how my birthday will be celebrated.