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2019.4.10 Today was very cold. 今天很冷。 In the morning I learned Japanese with my friend. 早上我和我的朋友一起学了日语。 And in the afternoon, I had English lessons. 下午,我上了英语课。 I feel very tired now, and I want to go to sleep. 我现在感觉很累,我想去睡觉。 But I still have many things to do. 但我还有很多事要做。 I am busy every day, for learning Japanese and English. 我每天都忙着学日语和英语。 Although it is very tired, I like this busy feeling. 虽然这很累,但我喜欢这种忙碌的感觉。 Everyone has their own way to learn language, I think perhaps I haven’t found that way. 每个人都有自己学习语言的方法,我想可能我还没找到我的方法。 So, I am not sure that if my way to learn English is right or not. 所以,我也不知道我学习英语的方法是否正确。 But I will try my best. 但是我会尽力的。 My Japanese friend told me she is very busy recently. 我的日本朋友告诉我她很忙。 So, we can’t have a chat for a long time. 所以很长一段时间我们不能会话了。

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2019.4.10

Today was very cold.
今天很冷。

In the morning I learned Japanese with my friend.
早上我和我的朋友一起学了日语。

And in the afternoon, I had English lessons.
下午,我上了英语课。

I feel very tired now, and I want to go to sleep.
我现在感觉很累,我想去睡觉。

But I still have many things to do.
但我还有很多事要做。

I am busy every day, for learning Japanese and English.
我每天都忙着学日语和英语。

Although it is very tired tiring, I like this busy feeling.
虽然这很累,但我喜欢这种忙碌的感觉。

Everyone has their own way to of learning a language, I think perhaps I haven’t found that my own way.
每个人都有自己学习语言的方法,我想可能我还没找到我的方法。

So, I am not sure that if my way to of learning English is the right way or not.  (or ... is the best way)
所以,我也不知道我学习英语的方法是否正确。

But I will try my best.
但是我会尽力的。

My Japanese friend told me she is very busy recently.
我的日本朋友告诉我她很忙。

So, we can’t couldn't have a chat for a long time.
所以很长一段时间我们不能会话了。


写的很棒。Only a few minor mistakes, you are progressing very well. :)

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