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Rogerio Coelho
Job in the future Today is a local holiday in the city where I live. But I have a job in a city nearby, and I need to go out to the work today. Always in my life I have been jobs in cities different where I have lived. There is a lot of cases like theses, where my family are enjoying a holiday and I workout hard in my job... Maybe one day I will have a job in my city where I will have the same benefits that I have in others cities. I will have thinking about an own business... I need to think more about and save enough money to guarantee some months without a regular wage. It is a hard decision..

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My Future Job

Today is a local holiday in the city where I live. But I have a job in a city nearby, and I need to go to work today. All my life, I have worked jobs in cities outside of where I lived. There have been many times when my family was enjoying a holiday, but I was out working hard at my job. Maybe one day I will have a job in my own city, where I will have the same benefits that I have in others cities. I have been thinking about my own business. I need to think more about it and save enough money to make sure I can last a few months without a regular wage. It is a hard decision.


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Job in the future

Today is a local holiday in the city where I live. However, I have a job in a city nearby, and I need to go out to work today. All my life, I have had jobs in different cities to where I live.  There are a lot of cases like this one, where my family are enjoying a holiday and I am working hard at my job... Maybe one day I will have a job in my city where I will have the same benefits that I have in others cities. I have been thinking about my own business... I need to think more about it and save enough money to guarantee some months without a regular wage. It is a hard decision.
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tks Nina. Your correction is very useful to me !!!! If you wanna practice Portuguese (from Brazil) I could help you.. Have a nice day !
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I have corrected this for you. I hope it helps. :)

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