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I gave a presentation during my second class today. It was about the characteristics of the Japanese language. After class, I had lunch at a tonjiru restaurant in Joynus, Yokohama. It was really delicious. After that, I came to Round One to play billiards .Next, I have a part-time job in Shin-Yokohama. Good day!

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Today, I gave a presentation during my second class. It was about the characteristics of the Japanese language. After class, I had lunch at a tonjiru restaurant in Joynus, Yokohama. It was really delicious. After that, I went to Round One to play billiards. Next, I have a part-time job in Shin-Yokohama. Good day!
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I gave a presentation during my second class today. It was about the characteristics of the Japanese language. After class, I had lunch at a tonjiru restaurant in Joynus, Yokohama. It was really delicious. After that, I came to Round One to play billiards. Next, I have to go to my part-time job in Shin-Yokohama. Have a good day!
Well done! Are you writing from Round One? If not, you need to say 'went' not 'came'. 'Good day' on its own as a greeting is a little old-fashioned now. Unless you mean that you had had a good day?

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