Meiji temple in Japan is a place where people go there to pray health and wealth even test qualified. I went there last Tuesday and the day was cloudy not so much hot and so many people went there with their family and friends because that day was holiday.
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Meiji temple in Japan is a place where people go to pray for health, wealth and
even test qualifications. I went there last Tuesday and the day was cloudy, not too hot. So many people went there with their family and friends because that day was holiday.
I deleted the there from people go there because you’re already talking about the place so there’s no need. But overall is great!
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