lana022019
Today in the morning it was sunny and hot, but after, started to rain.
4 ม.ค. 2023 เวลา 16:58
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Today in the morning it was sunny and hot, but after, started to rain.
Good job! Here are a few corrections: 1) you need the word "it" before the verb start: IT started to rain. If you don't use "it", the verb doesn't have any subject. 2) The word "after" is not adequately used in this sentence. It is a preposition, so you would have to say "after SOMETHING", for example "after lunch", "after the sunset", "after 3 o'clock", etc. The meaning of your sentence would be clearer if you used "later" instead of "after".
4 มกราคม 2023
Today in the morning it was sunny and hot, but after, started to rain.
Today has been overcast.
4 มกราคม 2023
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