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직접 만든 요리의 사진이 있나요? 어떻게 만들었어요?
22 พ.ย. 2021 เวลา 7:42
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직접 만든 요리 사진이 있나요? 어떻게 만들었어요?
문법적으로 맞는 문장이지만 실제로 대화할 때는 '의'를 빼는 게 더 자연스러워요! 이미 '직접 만든' 이라는 수식어가 있기때문에 '요리 사진'이라는 명사로 표현하는 게 더 자연스러워요:)
23 พฤศจิกายน 2021
직접 만든 요리 사진이 있나요? 어떻게 만들었어요?
원래 문장도 좋아요. 만약 실제 대화라면 '의'는 생략하는게 더 자연스러워요 :) (The original sentence is good, if it's spoken Korean, it's better to skip '의')
22 พฤศจิกายน 2021
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