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Please correct my Korean sentence, I want it to sound natural as possible. But it was very hard to find the exact words in Korean. 내가 가장 종아하는 영화는 해리포터 시리즈에요. 원작은 소설가 J.K Rowling 이썼어요. 영화 내용과 디테일이 소설이랑 생각했던것보다 뛰어나서 눈랐어요. 책에서 상상했던 배경과 풍경이 영화에서ㅜ잘 국현되서 빠져들기 좋았어요.
22 ก.พ. 2021 เวลา 12:16
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Please correct my Korean sentence, I want it to sound natural as possible. But it was very hard to find the exact words in Korean. 가장 종아하는 영화는 해리포터 시리즈예요. 원작은 소설가 J.K Rowling이^썼어요. 영화 내용과 디테일이 소설을 읽으면서 생각했던^것보다 뛰어나서 놀랐어요. 책에서 상상했던 배경과 풍경이 영화에서 잘 구현되서 빠져들기 좋았어요.
'구현되다'라는 표현 잘 쓰셨어요. 오타를 줄이는 연습도 해 보세요! 'ㅁ'
22 กุมภาพันธ์ 2021
Please correct my Korean sentence, I want it to sound natural as possible. But it was very hard to find the exact words in Korean. 내가 가장 종아하는 영화는 해리포터 시리즈에(예)요. 원작은 소설가 J.K Rowling 이(spacing)썼어요. 영화 내용과 디테일이 소설이랑(better to omit 소설이랑) 생각했던(spacing)것보다 뛰어나서 눈(놀)랐어요. 책에서 상상했던 배경과 풍경이 영화에서ㅜ잘 국현되서(구현돼 있어) 빠져들기 좋았어요.
22 กุมภาพันธ์ 2021
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