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90 day's training: Day 2
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I usually wake up about 6 o'clock weekdays.
2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have a dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and spend a little time for me.
3) I want to take a nap every day but it work out just only once or twice a week.
4) I have lots of books and DVDs to learn my target foreign languages.
5) I bought 10 new German books nowadays. But I want to read my English books first.
4 ก.ย. 2024 เวลา 11:07
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90 day's training: Day 2
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I usually wake up at about 6 o'clock on weekdays.
2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some housework and then I can have a little time for myself.
3) I want to take a nap every day but I can only do it once or twice a week.
4) I have lots of books and DVDs to help me learn my target foreign languages.
5) I've recently bought 10 new German books, but I want to read my English books first.
4 กันยายน 2024
90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance.
🐰 1) I usually wake up at 6 o'clock weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier
but I often have dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some
housework and then spend some time for myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but
it works out just only once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to
learn my target foreign language. 5) I bought 10 new German books, but
I want to read my English books first.
Great job! Just a few small things and it was almost perfect.
5 กันยายน 2024
90 day's training: Day 2
Could you please check my sentences please? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I usually wake up around 6 o'clock on weekdays.
2) I should go to bed earlier but often I have my dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and have some time for myself.
3) I want to take a nap every day but it actually happens only once or twice a week.
4) I have lots of books and DVDs to learn my targeted foreign languages.
5) I bought ten new German books these days, and I want to read my English books first.
4 กันยายน 2024
90 day's training: Day 2
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰
1) I usually wake up about 6 o'clock on weekdays.
2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have a dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and spend a little time by myself.
3) I want to take a nap every day but it works out that way just once or twice a week.
4) I have lots of books and DVDs to help me learn my target foreign languages.
5) I bought 10 new German books recently. But, I want to read my English books first.
Your only genuine mistakes are these:
#2: "for me" (grammatical, but doesn't sound good. "myself" is needed)
#3: "it work out"
#5: "nowadays" (Wrong because "nowadays" also includes the future. "Recently" only includes the past.)
All my other changes are only suggested improvements.
It is not wrong to say "I often have a dinner", though most people would leave out "a". The meaning changes slightly when you use "a".
"Weekdays" means the same as "on weekdays". You can say it either way.
4 กันยายน 2024
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