The sentence doesn’t work because it sounds like “dreams” is the direct object of “wish”: “Wish your dreams”. It is not your dreams that you wish. What you wish is that they be true. You need that to be the direct object: “wish that they be true.”
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I would say “wish that all 365 of your beautiful dreams” sounds a bit more natural.