Dangerous journey by Alwyn Cox This is story about four mans. They came back to a base from in a forest. At first, their truck stuck in a mud. After, their boss hit your arm. Next they across a river

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Dangerous journey by Alwyn Cox This is story about four mans. They came back to a base from in a forest. At first, their truck stuck in a mud. After, their boss hit your arm. Next they across a river on a boat, because a bridge was broken. But they had gotten help and had come back to the base.

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Dangerous journey by Alwyn Cox This is story about four men. They came back to their base from a forest. At first, their truck was stuck in mud. Because of this, their boss hit the driver's arm. Next they crossed a river on a boat, because the bridge was broken. But they had gotten help and had come back to the base.

Nice story! EXCELLENT last sentence and good work telling the story! (I was confused with arm hitting sentence, I hope I finished what you meant)

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