Please help me correct this paragraph below. Thanks in advance! Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the spa to get our armpit hair removed. This spa is famous in town so we had to book a timeslot for 3 people 3 days in advance. Before doing the treatment, the customer service staff notified me that if I’ve been using a roll-on deodorant which contains vitamin C within the last 2 weeks, they won’t use a laser to remove my armpit hair. Honestly, I don't remember exactly when I used a roll-on deodorant so I can’t use this treatment. We use cosmetics that contain vitamin C in order to make our skin whiter and brighter. However, that kind of cosmetics can’t be applied on the skin when we use laser or any similar treatment because the treated area will be injured and darkened. After getting the armpit hair removed by laser, the follicles are destroyed and fall. After that, hair will not grow anymore. The armpit hair removal treatment is done in 3 times, with a 6 months period between each session. Besides that, the spa will offer a 5-year guarantee if there are any problems. While I was waiting for my friends, I could smell the odour from the hair removal medicine. That’s why I felt split between using this treatment or removing my armpit hair myself.

Please help me correct this notebook below. Thanks in advance! Last Sunday, my friends and I went to the spa to get our armpit hair removed. This is a famous spa in the city so we had to book a timeslot for 3 people 3 days earlier. Before doing the treatment, the customer service staff advised me that if I’ve been using the roll-on deodorant which contains vitamin C or have used it within the last 2 weeks, I wouldn’t be able to use laser to remove the armpit hair. Honestly, I don't remember exactly when I last used the roll-on deodorant so I can’t use this treatment. We can use cosmetics that contain vitamin C for our skin to get whitened and brighter, except on the parts where we will use laser or any treatment because the area of the skin will be injured and darker. After getting the armpit hair removed by laser, the follicles are destroyed and fallen. After that, hair will not grow anymore. The armpit hair removal treatment takes 3 sessions, and each session 6 months apart. Besides that, the spa will guarantee for 5 years if there are any problems. While I was waiting for my friends, I could smell the odour from the hair removal treatment. That’s why I faced a dilemma whether to use this treatment to remove my armpit hair or not.