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因为她们都真烦人，我也太聪明了，所以她们都不喜欢我，她们我也都不喜欢。

I intend to say: Because they are really annoying and because I am too smart, they both do not like me, and I do not like them.

Does this sentence structure make sense?

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question if this makes sense
因为她们都真烦人，我也太聪明了， 所以她们都不喜欢我，她们我也都不喜欢。

I intend to say: Because they are really annoying and because I am too smart, they both do not like me, and I do not like them.

Does this sentence structure make sense?

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Try these:

We don’t like each other. I find those two annoying and they think I am too smart.

I don’t like those two because they are really annoying. They don’t like me because I am too smart.

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我不喜欢她们两个，她们太烦了。她们也不太喜欢我，因为我比较聪明。

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因为她们都很烦人而且我也太聪明了， 所以她们兩個都不喜欢我，我也不喜欢她們。

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Because they are annoying and I'm too smart so I don't like them and at the same time they don't like me either

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no, wrong word order and adjectives usage