North Pole
How is correct? Need help in translating the text. I seldom get sick. In winter, the cold wind can I have a cough or runny nose, but no fever. Can be a headache after a long work at the computer. And after the boring lessons, I feel tired, depressed and weak. I seldom feel a toothache or stomachache. When the weather changes dramatically I have a headache. I do not smokeand therefore I have no need stop smoking. I do not watch TV at all, but I spend a lot of time at the computer. I do not eat fast food, but I prefer something that I prepare myself. In the summer, I almost do not sunbathe. I love chocolate, as well as other sweet and even knowing, but try not to eat too much, so as not to harm the body shape and health.
27 ต.ค. 2014 เวลา 18:16
คำตอบ · 3
Hi Ann, I made some corrections for you here. Let me know if you have any questions about it. Is this correct? I need help translating the text. I seldom get sick. In winter, the cold wind can give me a cough or runny nose, but no fever. Sometimes I get a headache after a working for hours at the computer. And after the boring lessons, I feel tired, depressed and weak. I rarely get a toothache or stomach ache. When the weather changes dramatically, I do get a headache. I do not smoke and therefore I have no need stop smoking. I don't watch TV at all, but I spend a lot of time at the computer. I do not eat fast food, but I prefer something that I prepare myself. In the summer, I almost do not sunbathe. I love chocolate, as well as other sweets, and so I try not to eat too much, so as not to harm the body shape and health.
27 ตุลาคม 2014
Looks good! Here are some small corrections. Everything else looks great. "In winter, I may have a cough or runny nose because of the cold, but no fever." "I may have a headache after long work at the computer" "I do not eat fast food. I prefer something that I prepare myself." Explanation: You only use 'but' when the 2nd part says something that negates the 1st idea. "i do not eat fast food" and "i prepare my own food" are agreeing ideas, not negating ones "In the summer, I almost never sunbathe" is smoother than "almost do not" "I love chocolate, as well as other sweets, but I try not to eat too much, so as not to harm my health"
27 ตุลาคม 2014
Well said.I also don't smoke and try to stay healthy but I also love to eat chocolate.The only thing is that I don't exercise enough.
27 ตุลาคม 2014
ยังไม่พบคำตอบของคุณใช่ไหม
เขียนคำถามของคุณเพื่อให้เจ้าของภาษาช่วยคุณ!