I need to take some courses on knitting. On of my favorite things to do is traveling, but my surrounding circumstances don't really help! The best way to improve your draws or anything you love is just to practice a lot . I push myself to read books at least four pages a day. I need to take some knitting courses. The second sentence is OK but you could also say this: Travelling is one of my favourite things to do, unfortunately my surrounding circumstances prevent me from doing so as much as I would like to. The best way to improve your drawings, (if draws is referring to drawing) or anything you love, is to practice a lot. I push myself to read books and try to read at least four pages per day. I hope this helps :)

My correction is exactly the same as Daniel. I would like to point out two small differences. 1) ONE of my favorite - you missed the E on one. I'm guessing that this was just a typo. 2) Unfortunately my circumstances don't allow me to do as much of it as I would like. - I made a small change here. The word surrounding wasn't really necessary.