"Female education takers witnessed ..." does this sentence sounds correct and natural?
I wonder if the two sentences sound correct and natural to native speakers ?
If not , could u plz fix them for me ? Thanks a lot !

1. Female education takers witnessed increases in numbers, whether it be of full-time learners or part-time ones.

2. Recent years have witnessed an increase in the number of female education takers , whether be it full-time learners or part-time ones .

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"Female education takers  witnessed ..." does this sentence sounds correct and natural?
I wonder if the two sentences sound correct and natural to native speakers ?
If not , could u plz fix them for me ? Thanks a lot !

1. Female education takers witnessed increases in numbers, whether it be of full-time learners or part-time ones.

2. Recent years have witnessed an increase in the number of female education takers , whether  be it full-time learners or part-time ones .

Answer

Number 2 sounds better to me but I might change it to something that flows more naturally such as "There has been an increase in the number of female students seen in recent years; this includes both full-time and part-time learners."

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good job

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