My Description for the Color "Black"
Black is a color that never goes out of date, giving off a dignified sense of mystery with stability. It represents self-control, cool, low profile but with authority. Many managers or white-collar professionals like this particular color a lot.

Any suggestion or advice to make the above sentence sounds natural or fancier is very much appreciated.

Thank you all for your help in advance!

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My Description for the Color "Black"
Black is a color that never goes out of date, giving off a dignified sense of mystery with stability. It represents self-control, cool, low profile but with authority. Many managers or white-collar professionals like this particular color a lot.

Any suggestion or advice to make the above sentence sounds natural or fancier is very much appreciated.

Thank you all for your help in advance!

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@Phil,

Hahaha, that was just a stab, but multiple stabs. Now black has numerous holes on his body. I guess now is lifeless death and nothingness.

You interpreted this color from a whole different perspective, it's fun and I am not gonna lie. Thanks a lot!

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I'll take a stab at it! Better hold on:
Black is a hole, a shadow, a space between the stars, lifeless, death, nothingness.

Buuuut, i suppose you were describing 'black clothing'. That's harder! 
Black clothing is a background, anonymous, somber, sleeping, hiding in the shade, invisible in the night, creeping in the daylight.

Ok enough! That was fun. Kinda different, huh?!

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@Phil,

I am curious how would you describe Black?

@Calum,

Thank you for your help here. If it were you, what or how will you describe it?

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Perhaps you could change 'It represents self-control, cool, low profile but with authority' to 'It represents self-control, cool and an understated authority'.  Also maybe 'and' rather than 'or' in 'many managers or white-collar professionals...'  Otherwise, a nice description!

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Grammatically correct, but the content is your opinion. If I had to describe the color, my answer would be very different!

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