My last trip was a snowboarding trip to Gifu Prefecture. I snowboarded with my friends from morning to night. I was very tired. I ate yakiniku at night and my stomach was full. On the second day, I we

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Tsujimoto Takeshi

My last trip was a snowboarding trip to Gifu Prefecture. I snowboarded with my friends from morning to night. I was very tired. I ate yakiniku at night and my stomach was full. On the second day, I went to the sauna with my friend. We were in three hours there.

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20 มี.ค. 2024 เวลา 14:06

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My last trip was a snowboarding trip to Gifu Prefecture. I snowboarded with my friends all day. I was very tired. I ate yakiniku at night and was full. On the second day, I went to the sauna with my friend. We stayed there for three hours.

よく書けてますよ！岐阜県でスノボの旅行はすごく楽しそー🏂 いっぱい楽しんでうれしいなあ！ →「from morning to night」は正しい英語ですが、「all day」のほうが自然だと思います！ →「my stomach was full」も合ってますが、「was full」と使ったら、アメリカ人には自然な英語に聞こえます。お腹がいっぱいについて話す時、英語では「stomach」を略すことできます。”お腹”がいっぱいこともう知ってますからね。無理のない範囲で英語の勉強を頑張ってくださいね♪

20 มีนาคม 2024

My last trip was a snowboarding trip to Gifu Prefecture. I snowboarded with my friends from morning to night, and at the end of the day I was very tired. I ate yakiniku for dinner and had a full stomach. On the second day, I went to the sauna with my friend and we stayed for three hours.

20 มีนาคม 2024

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