I explore a new hobby because I like new experiences. I probe sewing but I realize that I am afraid of needles. Since I try hard, I do well in high school. I am also doing well thanks to the help of

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Alex Domin

I explore a new hobby because I like new experiences. I probe sewing but I realize that I am afraid of needles. Since I try hard, I do well in high school. I am also doing well thanks to the help of my friends and classmate.

6 ก.พ. 2024 เวลา 9:09

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I always look for a new hobby because I like new experiences. I tried sewing but I realized that I am afraid of needles. Since I try hard, I do well in high school. I am also doing well thanks to the help of my friends and a classmate.

6 กุมภาพันธ์ 2024

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Hi, Alex. I’d suggest “try” instead of “probe.” We could also use a conditional “would” here: I would try sewing, but I realize I’m afraid of needles.

6 กุมภาพันธ์ 2024

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I explored a new hobby because I like new experiences. I tried sewing, but then I realized that I am afraid of needles. Another thing I'd like to say is that since I always try hard, I do well in high school. But I am also doing well thanks to the help of my friends and classmates.

20 กุมภาพันธ์ 2024