The Tim じぁん!!!
It's sunny today. According to our tradition, my dad is supposed to visit my maternal grandparents today. We had a lovely dinner at their home. Personally, I enjoyed their chocolates more than their food. They received a lot of them—many relatives visited and brought chocolates along, which was interesting. I wonder why I didn't receive any! My grandpa is still walking with a limp. I hope he gets better soon.
11 ก.พ. 2024 เวลา 15:51
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It's sunny today. According to our tradition, my dad is supposed to visit my maternal grandparents today. We had a lovely dinner at their home. Personally, I enjoyed their chocolates more than their food. They received a lot of them—many relatives visited and brought chocolates along, which was interesting. I wonder why I didn't receive any! My grandpa is still walking with a limp. I hope he gets better soon.
Hope so too.
11 กุมภาพันธ์ 2024
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It's sunny today. According to our tradition, my dad is supposed to visit my maternal grandparents today. We had a lovely dinner at their home. Personally, I enjoyed their chocolates more than their food. They received a lot of them—many relatives visited and brought chocolates along, which was interesting. I wonder why I didn't receive any! My grandpa is still walking with a limp. I hope he gets better soon.
Perfect! No corrections needed. Awesome job! :)
11 กุมภาพันธ์ 2024
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