When i travel i prefer to stay in hostel because i just need the room for sleep and the shower . I spend all the day out the hostel, but before i choice the hostel i see the reviews and i prefer it b

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When i travel i prefer to stay in hostel because i just need the room for sleep and the shower . I spend all the day out the hostel, but before i choice the hostel i see the reviews and i prefer it be in the city center

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15 ก.พ. 2022 เวลา 10:10

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When I travel, I prefer to stay in a hostel because I just need the room for sleeping and showering. I spend all day out of the hostel but before I choose the hostel I look at the reviews, and I prefer it to be in the city center.

Very good, well done! Only a few changes to make it sound more natural, but I understood what you were saying perfectly. Remember to use a capital letter when writing "I". 😊✨

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