I had a part-time job today. I always work outside. The weather was so gooand a lot of customers should have come, but it was too hot and there were few customers!! I have a part-time job tomorrow, bu

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I had a part-time job today. I always work outside. The weather was so gooand a lot of customers should have come, but it was too hot and there were few customers!! I have a part-time job tomorrow, but I'm sure it will be the same as today. I'm back home now, so I'm going to watch the One Piece anime that my friend recommended to watch after finish my assignment.

21 มิ.ย. 2025 เวลา 7:21

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I had a part-time job today. I always work outside. The weather was so good and a lot of customers should have come, but it was too hot and there were few customers!! I have a part-time job tomorrow, but I'm sure it will be the same as today. I'm back home now, so I'm going to watch the One Piece anime that my friend recommended to watch after I finish my assignment.

It's good, the phrasing is a bit unnatural to my ears but well done!

21 มิ.ย. 2025 เวลา 7:28

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