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I went to my favorite group’s concert with my friend who lives in another prefecture. We met in Chiba two hours before the concert started. First, we bought a hand fan and some concert goods. Then we took a lot of pictures and drank milk tea. After the live, we were planning to eat sushi for dinner. But the shop we went to was near the live venue, so there were a lot of people. We waited for a while, but we ended up going to a sushi restaurant at the wrong station. I stayed at a hotel in Chiba with my friend that day. Next day, we went to Tokyo Station and visited a character street. I had a good time.
6 ต.ค. 2025 เวลา 12:10
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I went to my favorite group’s concert with my friend who lives in another prefecture. We met in Chiba two hours before the concert started. First, we bought a hand fan and some concert goods/merch. Then we took a lot of pictures and drank milk tea. After the live, we were planning to eat sushi for dinner. But the shop we went to was near the live venue, so there were a lot of people. We waited for a while, but we ended up going to a sushi restaurant at the wrong station. I stayed at a hotel in Chiba with my friend that day. The Next day, we went to Tokyo Station and visited a character street. I had a good time.
良く書けていますよ!特に添削することはないと思います。友だちとの良い一日みたいでよかったです。色々できて楽しそうです。誰のコンサートに行くんですか?😇🎶 ちなみに、コンサートのグッズは英語で口語的に”merch”と言いますよ。この調子で勉強し続けてくださいね!
6 ต.ค. 2025 เวลา 21:45
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