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I had a really great time with my friends. My friends always make me happy.
28 มี.ค. 2024 เวลา 14:48
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I had a really great time with my friends. My friends always make me happy. HELLO!!!!!! Overall, your sentence effectively communicates your feelings about spending time with your friends. Well done! 1. Clarity: The sentence is clear and easy to understand. There's no ambiguity in the message you're conveying. 2. Conciseness: The sentence is concise and to the point, which is generally a good thing. However, you could consider combining the two sentences to avoid repetition. For example you could say: "I had a really great time with my friends, who always make me happy." This combines the two ideas into a single sentence, maintaining clarity and reducing repetition.
29 มี.ค. 2024 เวลา 0:50
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My friends always make me happy.
28 มี.ค. 2024 เวลา 22:13
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