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I played the flute today. These days, I restart practicing the flute so that I’m going to give a performance in the concert. Although I retired from brass band club, I’d like to keep practicing the flute. To create music is very wonderful. Music always makes me happy.
29 มี.ค. 2023 เวลา 14:19
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I played the flute today. These days, I restart practicing the flute so that I’m going to give a performance in the concert. (I started practicing the flute again, because I’m going to give a concert performance.) Although I retired from brass band club, I’d like to keep practicing the flute. (Although I am not a member brass band club anymore, I still like to practice the flute.) To create music is very wonderful. (Making music is very wonderful.) Music always makes me happy.
These days, I restart practicing the flute so that I’m going to give a performance in the concert. (I started practicing the flute again, because I’m going to give a concert performance.)
29 มีนาคม 2023
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I played the flute today. These days, I restart practicing the flute so that I’m going to give a performance in the concert. Although I retired from brass band club, I’d like to keep practicing the flute. To create music is very wonderful. Music always makes me happy.
Your vocabulary is very good! Keep practicing sentence structure and using consistent verb tenses.
29 มีนาคม 2023
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