There are written in a difficult and obscure style. It is not possible to focus on one interpretation to the exclusion of the alternative readings. “Secret fragrance” is the more lucid of the two pie

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There are written in a difficult and obscure style. It is not possible to focus on one interpretation to the exclusion of the alternative readings. “Secret fragrance” is the more lucid of the two pieces. The blossom, which is explicitly mentioned in the third line, is not used as a metaphor for the woman but as an object that brings back memories of her to the speakers. Throughout the whole piece, the experiencing subject (the lyrics speaker) and the experienced object (the blossom) remain distant, and the former is the agent that ties everything together. The strong personal tone of “Secret Fragrance”disappears in “Dappled Shadows.” The lyric speaker has given way to the plum blossom in becoming the integrative force in this work. There is a multilayered symbolic framework centered on the material object in “Dappled Shadows.” If “Secret Fragrance” is concerned with reminiscing of reminiscence of a woman from the perspective of the lyric speaker, “Dappled Shadows” is focused on the experience of seclusion and loneliness that find a symbolic embodiment in the plum blossom.

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The pieces are written in a difficult and obscure style. It is not possible to focus on one interpretation to the exclusion of the alternative readings. "Secret Fragrance" is the more lucid of the two pieces. The blossom, which is explicitly mentioned in the third line, is not used as a metaphor for the woman but as an object that brings back memories of her to the speaker. Throughout the whole piece, the experiencing subject (the lyric speaker) and the experienced object (the blossom) remain distant, and the former is the agent that ties everything together. The strong personal tone of "Secret Fragrance" disappears in "Dappled Shadows." The lyric speaker has given way to the plum blossom in becoming the integrative force in this work. There is a multilayered symbolic framework centered on the material object in "Dappled Shadows." If "Secret Fragrance" is concerned with reminiscing of a woman from the perspective of the lyric speaker, "Dappled Shadows" is focused on the experience of seclusion and loneliness that find a symbolic embodiment in the plum blossom.

"There are written" has been corrected to "The pieces are written" for correct subject-verb agreement. "lyrics speaker" has been corrected to "lyric speaker" for correct spelling. "remembrance of reminiscence" has been corrected to "reminiscing" for better phrasing.

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They are written in a difficult and obscure style. It is not possible to focus on one interpretation to the exclusion of the alternative readings. “Secret fragrance” is the more lucid of the two pieces. The blossom, which is explicitly mentioned in the third line, is not used as a metaphor for the woman but as an object that brings back memories of her to the speakers [should it be speaker---singular?]. Throughout the whole piece, the experiencing subject (the lyrics speaker) and the experienced object (the blossom) remain distant, and the former is the agent that ties everything together. The strong personal tone of “Secret Fragrance” disappears in “Dappled Shadows.” The lyric speaker [just "the speaker" or perhaps "the speaker of the song/poem"] has given way to the plum blossom in becoming the integrative force in this work. There is a multilayered symbolic framework centered on the material object here. If “Secret Fragrance” is concerned with the reminiscence of a woman from the perspective of the speaker, “Dappled Shadows” is focused on the experience of seclusion and loneliness that find a symbolic embodiment in the plum blossom.

Very little---arguably nothing---here is wrong exactly. It sounds rather dense and difficult, but so do must writings about the analysis of poetry. On that point: are we talking about songs or poems? For songs, we refer to the lyrics. For a poem, there is just the poem because there isn't a broader experience of it to refer of (there isn't any song of it to discuss). Thus for a poem, we would not say "the lyrics speaker", just "the speaker", but that is also true of a song. For a song, if you say the "speaker" we know you mean the speaker within the lyrics.

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