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Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot. Even the air feels hot. My house and university are cool because of the air conditioner, but it is so hot outside that the temperature difference might make me feel sick. I feel tired and have no energy. I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy more cooling items.
1 ก.ค. 2025 เวลา 3:46
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Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot, even the air feels hot. My house and university are cool because of they have air conditioners / air conditioning systems, but it is so hot outside that the temperature difference might make me feel sick. I feel tired and have no energy and I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy more cooling items.
Well written, take care.
1 ก.ค. 2025 เวลา 11:27
Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot. Even the air
feels hot. My house and university are cool because of the air conditioner, but
it is so hot outside that the temperature difference might make me feel sick. I
feel tired and have no energy. I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy
more cooling items.
Well done!!
1 ก.ค. 2025 เวลา 10:59
Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot. Even the air
feels hot. My house and university are cool because of the air conditioner, but
it is so hot outside that the temperature difference might make me sick. I
feel tired and have no energy. I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy
more cooling items.
1 ก.ค. 2025 เวลา 10:58
Hello. Today is the first day of July in Japan. It is very hot,such that even the air
feels hot. My house and the u
niversity are cool because of the air conditioner.
it is so hot outside that the heat might make me feel sick. I
feel tired and have no energy. I always bring a handheld fan, but I want to buy
more cooling items.
Avoid short minute sentences and use conjunctions to merge those smaller sentences. Otherwise well written 👏 well done!
1 ก.ค. 2025 เวลา 5:54
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