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The baby bird 2 Then, she called Pio to the baby bird and fed it with great love and care. In its early days, Pio ate bread dipped in milk , very small pieces of meat, too and slept in a shoes box. As days went by, Pio was growing and he often left its box to jump all over our living room. Little by little, he was learning to fly and used to perch on the top of the backrest of a chair. After a couple of months, Pio was enough old to be released, nevertheless, we realized that it was so easy to catch him, so it would be easier to be hunted by a cat. For this reason and after extensive family deliberation we decided to keep him. In conclusion, after five years we have a bird that apparently couldn't live in captivity.

The baby bird In November 2oo8, Guillermina, my older daughter found a defenseless baby bird on the ground under a big tree. In addition, the baby bird was almost a few days of life and of course, couldn’t fly. So, Guillermina decided bring it home because she thought that the baby bird would die whether no one fed it or perhaps killed by a stray cat. Next day, she took the baby bird to a pet shop. The vet told her the bird was a thrush and these kind of birds didn’t live in captivity moreover, one way or another the bird finally would die. She came back home so sad, however she was disposed to make every effort to save the baby bird.

The trip 3 A few hours later Daniel and David returned with the wheel repaired. They had traveled several miles looking for a repairman who would repair the tire. We assembled the wheel on the motorcycle and when everything was ready to leave Daniel and David told us that the reparation hadn't been the most appropriate. Because the repairman had not genuine parts of the wheel, then he solved as he could. Then we discussed for minutes about continue our journey or return to home. From my point of view, we could not travel under such conditions. Finally, and in spite of the bad humor of Daniel and David we decided to go back to home. That is how, our well planned trip failed.

The trip 2 After that, we returned to the way and drove along 100 km. placidly without problem. All it seemed going well when the tire of Walter's motorbike exploded. Fortunately, he managed stopping the bike which for a moment it seemed out of control. We were again on the side of the road facing a new inconvenient. Later, Daniel and David set off carrying the wheel that we had disassembled previously. We had the expectation that they found someone who could repair the tire. That wouldn't be hard if we weren't about 300 km. away from the city in the middle of the countryside.

The trip It was in 2009 when my biker friends and I decided to go to a bike rally in a town about 600 km. of the city. Walter, Daniel, David and I, prepared our trip during a couple of weeks. After days making all necessary arrangements in our motorcycles, we were ready to go. Finally, at 3 pm of a shining Saturday and with very enthusiasm we left. Without doubt, conditions were the best to ride on motorbike. We had traveled during an hour when suddenly my motorcycles windshield broke down. This unexpected issue was the cause of our first stop on the side of the road. It took ten o fifteen minutes solve the problem.

Caring for the environment The industrial waste and the litter are the main cause of pollution of the river's water that passes through our community. The students, of local high school, have organized a working day with the aim to cleaning up the riverside. We invite you to take part helping to clean the area and put new rubbish bins. Moreover, the municicpal authorities have informed to the industries that they have to treat its waste correctly before dumping them in the water. In addition, will be launched a campaign to encourage the people to keep clean the water and the riverside. In order to avoid reaching a no return situation, we hope the people become aware of the importance of preserve the quality of the water and the riverside for mutual gain. We hope, recover the riverside and the quality of water and preserve the place like a nice recreation area for all the community.

Native speaker of Spanish learning English Hello: I'm learning English because I need it for my job and I like it as well. I'm from Buenos Aires, Argentina, I'm native speaker of Spanish.