Who is the visitor tonight? ( Part 1) I am trying to improve my story telling skills as well as my conversation abilities through dialogues. Appreciate your corrections. Bob is a naughty guy, he is 8 years old. He is smart, adventure seeker and likes to talk with anyone. His parents always warned him not to be impulsive. But he never listens. One day he was running in the garden and suddenly slipped his leg and fell over. An old woman ran into him and checked him Are you okay ? Yes Ma'am, I am fine, but.. where did you come from? I didn't see you! I am your rescuer, you will find me whenever you need me. Bob looked at her with surprise and told her. How come Ma'am! how come will you know where I am ? I will know, and soon you will know why. Bob went back home wondering what is going on. he knocked the door but no one answered. Oh my good, once again no one answers. He went to the garden, climbed the pipe and kicked the window with his leg and slipped into the kitchen. Bob!!! What are you doing? Mom, where were you ??? Don't change the subject, haven't I tell you not to do that again? and your dirty legs just made my floor dirty again, I just finished swiping the floor. I rang the bell many times mom and no one was answering, plus I felt someone behind me so I had to get in quickly. I don't believe your non stop stories bob. One more time and I will send you to your aunt in the forest. You will know what is discipline. No mom, it is scary out there. I won't do it again. We will see. To be continued....