meaning Hi guys what is the difference between deteriorate and aggravate? Thanks for your time.

Who can help me to write a formal letter? Thanks. Hello Dear I am writing to get your approval for submitting my ethics application. The attached files are patient/clinician questionnaires. Patient has considered to complete three surveys during inpatient treatment, outpatient cardiac rehabilitation program, and also two months after completing the program. I have to emphasise that patient will compete the questionnaires step by step during 5 months. Questions are easy to answer and do not take a lot of times. Clinician will also rate patient engagement twice: at the first session of the program and at the end of the program. I will be more than happy to have your comments and feedback. If it is possible, I will send you the National Ethics Application Form (NEAF) for signing it after receiving your approval. Another issue is that I need to have the name of one person in the hospital to complete the NEAF. I look forward to hearing from you. I appreciate your time and consideration. Best regards Sepideh

Would you please correct my writing What factors impeded or facilitated to continue with cardiac rehabilitation after starting the program? (was it personality variables, such as sense of well-being, socialization (acceptance of rules and regulations), and communality (view of self as similar to others); self-efficacy in performing a specified activity; seeing or not seeing an improvement; referring or not referring with a physician; the program enjoyment or not enjoyment; social support or motivation; the effect of the group; self-help and so on).

Would you please correct my writing? Thanks. Today, the weather is heavily rainy. I am used to this weather in Australia. It simply makes you isolated at the first glance. I mean you have to stay at home. But there are many ways to cherish your life. You could sit in the balcony and enjoy watching the nature. Birds are making noise, seeking out food and shelter. They are fluffed up to keep their salves warm.Your balcony could be a good shelter for them to do not be wet and stay there for a long period. Sometimes you could explore various species of birds that even when you were busy, you have not paid attention to them. So, a rainy day could help you to love the nature that surrounds you. The nature assists you to improve yourself and put yourself in a wonderful condition. I love Australia nature. It is amazing and could not find any place like here all around the world.

would you please correct my essay? Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternative to a natural environment. Is it necessary to keep animals in zoos? Whether to admit that keeping animals in zoos is better or give animals freedom to live in the natural environment is a debatable issue; however, it is strongly believed that keeping them in zoos is more efficient for some sound reasons. In what follows, these reasons are expressed and elucidated. First of all, as far animal protection is concerned, keeping animals in zoos help them to save their lives and conserve them from extinction. All animals, in particular some kind of rare animals, that are endangered such as pandas, African elephants, and North East triggers could enjoy good care, and protect them away from any harm. Secondly, by protecting animals in zoos rather than natural environments, not only do we rescue them from extinction, but also we can offer a place for entertaining people. Individual can go to zoos and see different kinds of animals and this way increase their knowledge about animals, particularly pets. Therefore, in terms of awareness, zoos can be good places that people can learn how to behave with animals. Finally, as scientific discoveries have been growing rapidly, educating from animals is not considered an option anymore; on the contrary, it is an obligation. Hence, zoos can serve a purpose of educating for providing a good environmental condition in the nature for them. We do not know about lives of some species of animal completely. By observing them in zoos, it is straightforward to know about them further and help them to live better than before. Considering all aspects of the issue which have been discussed above, it can be concluded keeping animals in zoos is more efficient, this is the main reason to keep animals in zoos. As we can see every day, the number of zoos in the world is growing, and this is a good evident to the facts that I explain above.

now there is an increased work related stress. Explain the causes and what should be done? Modern life has its advantages and its disadvantages. In deed, everything has its own two sides and modern life is not an exception. From one side it can provide many useful progresses to live better. On the other side it causes many healthy problems such as stress. Stress can be stemmed from a variety of factors. Many researches have shown that the majority reason of stress is related to work place. Some major factors causes stress related to work. In what follows, these contributing factors are expressed and some strategies for reducing this phenomenon suggested. First of all, as educated people are growing rapidly, competition in work place is not considered an option anymore; on the contrary, it is an obligation. Therefore, if organizations could not conduct this aspect properly, it can lead to many bad effects on employers such as loss of self-esteem and as a sequence the level of stress will be raised in them. For solving this problem, it is suggested that a good competitive culture has been provided by top managers of organizations that employers can develop job knowledge. By doing this, the bad effects of stress can be reduced somehow. Secondly, as far as job discrimination is concerned, working in such organization in not considered safe. Employers are used to comparing themselves with each other and if they notice, there is discrimination among them this problem causes dissatisfaction in them which leads to strain. It is up to department of work and social welfare to evaluate organizations based on some discrimination measurements for doing interventions. Considering all major reasons of work stress, it can be concluded that organization should be worked more efficient in this area. As we can see every day, the number of people who have job stress is growing dramatically. This is a good evidence to the fact that they do not work well in this issue.

please check my essay. Thanks. Many people in the world are experiencing overpopulation, especially developing and underdeveloped countries. As you question people of these countries, they will consider many critical problems which are encountered. For solving these problems, there are many ways. However, need all both government and individuals do collective attempts. In this essay, I would like to count down some problems which are originated from this issue and consider some solutions for solving it. First and foremost problematic issue is human health. Imagine you live in an overcrowded city. You can understand that the weather is polluted. This factor will put you in health risks. Many researches have been done about this matter and shown that people who live in polluted cities are susceptible for respiratory diseases in long term. Take, for example, lung cancer, asthma and so on which are chronic diseases and patients have to tolerate them over lifetime. Second, educational facilities are provided hardly by government. Therefore, the government is not able to meet all educational needs of population. Therefore, the literary rate will be dropped and as a sequence quality of life will be dramatically changed in a negative way. It is obvious, as this factor is so important in the term of health; people will encounter with many problems because they are not educated persons and are not able to manage their lives properly. For solving this problematic situation, there are many long term strategies. Firstly, governments have to establish one child policy. By doing this, after passing decades, we will witness that the rate of population in countries level off or even decrease. However, this action needs to be obeyed by families. Indeed, it is a collective responsibility. Secondly, governments have to implement traffic laws and enforce people to use public transportations instead of using private cars. It is certainly true to say that by doing many actions governments are able to control population and avoid many problems, which related to overpopulation. Therefore, they will save money and reduce the burden of catastrophic diseases in future. Having a happy life is an ambition of any person. It is obvious that it is a duty of individuals and governments to provide it.

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? The way of communication has changed in the era of technology. Technology makes a huge progress in every aspects of our life. However, it effects on style of communication more than the other areas. I agree this kind of technology affect the kinds of relationships in positive way. For holding this idea, I have a few reasons as follow. First of all, technology leads to have a cheaper communication. There are many ways to talk with your family such as telephone call, using the Internet and so on. Although all of these ways are available, you can use internet. In this decade, internet is so cheap and everybody has access to it in all places. For example, I have a friend in Australia who calls her occasionally. By using internet, I can talk to her cheaper than before and by doing this I can hear her voice more than before that I called her by telephone. Therefore, the usefulness of technology is obvious in this way. Secondly, this progress makes you happier than before. As you are always in contact with your family members, you feel good. Feeling good is the best impact of technology on our lives. For instance, everybody is used to come online in a whole time of a day. So, when you are on line, you can talk with all your friends about different things; sharing your experiences with others and learn new things. By the Internet, you are able to have video conference and see your family members and feel you are beside them. This kind of feeling makes you calm, even though you are very far from them. Technology can cause you do don’t feel depressed. Thirdly, there are many alternative ways for communicating with others. It is possible for you in varied conditions apply different ways to be in contact with others. You can send an email to your advisor for asking your request if you can ask him/her your request face to face or you can just send a message via your cell phone when you are so busy and save your time. Even though, when your cell phone is disconnected for instance you can use the internet. There are many prompt choices. It is wonderful influence of developing. To sum up, technology has many positive effects on human life and makes everything easy to do. Indeed, it changes our lifestyle. In addition, No one can divert the impact of this marvelous phenomenon in their lives.

would you please look over my essay? Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement? Some people think that young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport. Others think that playing sports are better for young people. In my opinion, the second idea is much more acceptable. For holding this idea I have a few important reasons as follows: Playing sport helps young people to be healthy. Exercise is inevitable part of our lives. For having a healthy society, we have to encourage young people to do more sports. By doing this, the burden of disease will be decreased and government can invest on other parts of people life for improving health problems. For instance, by having a healthy society we will not suffer from chronic diseases like respiratory system and cardiovascular diseases and even some kinds of cancer such as lung cancer. So, encouraging young people to spend more time on sports will help us to have a better world. Moreover, all of young people are not talented in doing cultural activities such as music and theatre. We are not able to force them to spend time in these kinds of activities. A little percentage of the population has this ability to be supreme in this area. On the contrary, we need to grow on this part (cultural scope). It seems logical for the government to invest on the prominent persons in this area, however they are scarce, for achieving the goal, which is presentation of our culture to the world. Sport is important element in our life and we cannot disregard the importance of it for society and can lead to a better generation in the future. The evidence shows that more than half of young people are interested in sports as they know the significant role of it in their quality of life. To sum up, having a healthy country is the first priority for every government and we should set up many different programs and facilities for young people to have this chance to do a variety of sports. By investment in this section, we will be able to reduce the burden of disease in the public and have a productive community.