Please help me correct this essay below. Thank you so much! "At work, I am fortunate to use my 4 English skills to work with partners from other countries. Since then, my English has improved and become fluent. When I was a college student and after graduating from college, I was a part-time tutor teaching English to middle and high school students. During that time, I can understand the difficulty of learning a new language I am very patient, enthusiastic and ready to help them. Besides that, I am also a good friend who always shares and listens to their concerns. When I saw the description of this position, I was really impressed with your message. I hope I can use my ability and dedication to convey meaningful things from the Vietnamese language and our culture."

Describe the weather of the city today Vietnam is a country located near the equator so it has a tropical climate, which means it’s hot, humid and with a lot of rain. Vietnam has both a tropical climate zone and temperate climate zone, with all of the country experiencing the effects of the annual monsoon. Therefore, there are lots of heavy rain that falls during the summer. The difference among 4 seasons is not too clear and just have some signals happpened. Therefore, it can be said that there are only 2 typical seasons, summer and winter. I’m currently living in the South Central Coast. The weather in this month is summer. This is also the hottest period in a year. The temperature on these days is from 32 to 38 degrees and can reach to 40 degrees in the afternoon. In this season, the average temperature is below 30 degrees in the countryside due to covered by trees. In the crowded cities, the living environment is totally affected by smog, the heat of air conditioners so the temperature always reach to over 40 celsius.

Please help me correct this essay. Thanks a lot! "How do parents protect their children from being affected the negativity contents when going online? In my opinion, there have lots of ideas for parents to protect their children from being affected the negativity contents when going online. In this essay, I just point out some the realistic ways and may apply easily. 1. The first one is the most important thing: Always taking time to listen and sharing with your children about what happened around them. That may be a fault or just an aimless story but it’s able to help children not spending lots of time online and use electrical devices. Besides that, this way may increase the bond between family members. 2. When covid 19 pandemic broke out, children just can stay at home and can’t go to school. So online classes are the effective solution to support them to be able to continue studying. However, parents should control their time on using the Internet by checking history and the time of using. 3. Parents should explain the benefits and dangers when going online, from that their children can self control as well as build a helpful habit that align with the demand of their study. Overall, If unsupervised by adults, childrend can be enticed to see contents that contained violent, negativity or other offensive materials. That can lead to serious behavioral, ethical and cognitive distortions.

How do parents protect their children from being affected the negativity contents when going online? In my opinion, there have lots of ideas for parents to protect their children from being affected the negativity contents when going online. In this essay, I just point out some the realistic ways and may apply easily. 1. The first one is the most important thing: Always taking time to listen and sharing with your children about what happened around them. That may be a fault or just an aimless story but it’s able to help children not spending lots of time online and use electrical devices. Besides that, this way may increase the bond between family members. 2. When covid 19 pandemic broke out, children just can stay at home and can’t go to school. So online classes are the effective solution to support them to be able to continue studying. However, parents should control their time on using the Internet by checking history and the time of using. 3. Parents should explain the benefits and dangers when going online, from that their children can self control as well as build a helpful habit that align with the demand of their study. Overall, If unsupervised by adults, childrend can be enticed to see contents that contained violent, negativity or other offensive materials. That can lead to serious behavioral, ethical and cognitive distortions.

Nowadays, due to the strong development of technology as well as electrictity devices, most of us can use Internet widely and easily. If users are mature and knowledgeable enough, they can control on reading and reception the information on there. However, if users are children who aged from 4 to below 15 years old, they will have to face with lots of threats on the internet. Youtube, Tik Tok and Facebook are the 3 popular social medias that attract majority of children. While Yotube released Youtube Kids version to provide a more contained environment for kids to explore, other social medias still allow the users post videos, images that have been not censored yet. When not be supervised by adults, children can be enticed to see the contents contained violence, negativity or offence, that can lead to serious behavioral, ethical, and cognitive distortions. Besides that, children may be victims of cross border human traffickings, child sexual abuse or other society’s vices.

Please help me correct this notebook below. Thank in advance! "What did you do during reunification and Labour day holiday? Vietnamese Reunification day is held annually on April 30th, marking the liberation of south Vietnam and the unification of Vietnam. International worker’s day is also called Labour Day which means to commemorate the International worker’s movement of the 1800s. The dates of these two holidays are consecutive so this time of year is therefore looked forward to due to numerous days off occuring at the same time. On these holidays, the government allows all citizens to take time off from work or not need to go to school. Some companies or organizations will have holiday’s bonus for all employees. If the dates fall on the weekdays from Monday to Wednesday, we’ll be off on 2 days. If they appear on Thursday, Friday, the holidays will last longer to Sunday. And on the case on the weekends, we have 2 rostered days off like this year. On the first day of the holidays, I attended my high school’s wedding. The next day, I visited a trendy destination 50 km away from my city by my scooter. The remaining days, I took time for my parents and relatives. Besides Tet holiday, Reunification Day and Labour Day holidays are the second important holiday for citizens. We spend these days to be grateful and remember the heroes who sacrificed."

What did I do during reunification and Labour day holidays? Vietnamese Reunification day is held annually on April 30th, marking the liberation of south Vietnam and the unification of Vietnam. International worker’s day is also called Labour Day which means to commemorate the International worker’s movement of the 1800s. The dates of these two holidays are consecutive so this time of year is therefore looked forward to due to numerous days off occuring at the same time. On these holidays, the government allows all citizens to take time off from work or not need to go to school. Some companies or organizations will have holiday’s bonus for all employees. If the dates fall on the weekdays from Monday to Wednesday, we’ll be off on 2 days. If they appear on Thursday, Friday, the holidays will last longer to Sunday. And on the case on the weekends, we have 2 rostered days off like this year. On the first day of the holidays, I attended my high school’s wedding. The next day, I visited a trendy destination 50 km away from my city by my scooter. The remaining days, I took time for my parents and relatives. Besides Tet holiday, Reunification Day and Labour Day holidays are the second important holiday for citizens. We spend these days to be grateful and remember the heroes who sacrificed.

In my country, we have 7 holidays, include: New Year’s Day, Lunar New Year (also called Tet hoilday), Hung Kings Commemorations, Reunification Day, International worker’s day, Vietnam National Day, Christmas. 1. New Year’s Day The most important New Year’s celebrations in VN occur during the traditional Lunar New Year. However, Vietnam also celebrates New Year’s Day according to the Gregorian Calendar on 1 january. will be off on this day. 2. Lunar New Year is called Tet holiday, which is the most important holiday in Vietnamese tradition and generally falls in late January or early February. This holiday will last 5 to 7 days for employees and 15 days for students so everyone can enjoy a lot of unique and diverse festivals. It can be said that Tet is not only an important traditional event, but also an occasion to gather all the family members, visit relatives and friends.

What weather do you like the most? For me, it’s summer. I’m currently living in a coastal city so I really like outside activities on the beach such as jogging, running, picnic, swimming or rowing. It can be said that summer is the best time for sports lovers. Besides that, this is the suitable era to harvest tropical fruits such as pomelo, jackfruit, durian, longan, rambutan.