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Looking for a teacher to correct my English diaries Hi, I’m Yun. I have been writing daily English diary more than 3 months. My diary is quite personal, I don’t feel comfortable to share on this community. I want to find a teacher who can correct my diary, I hope you can also help me writing in a natural way, not only grammar and spelling. I also want to have a lesson every two weeks to discuss the common mistakes in my diary or the grammar, vocabularies or whatever which I can improve. If you are the teacher I’m looking for, please send me a message. Thank you😊
3 มีนาคม 2022
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Swimming alone Today I went swimming alone. I used to go swimming with my father at a gym. I lost my membership in that gym two weeks ago, but my father still has a membership with it. We found another swimming pool is not far from the gym. We can leave home at the same time and leave me at the swimming pool, then after we swim my father can come to pick me up.
16 กรกฎาคม 2020
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Summary and comment of a news Hope someone can help my writing ✍️ 😊 —————— Summary and comment of a news : Fake Fans in South Korean's Stadiums During the coronavirus pandemic, many countries in the world postponed the sports leagues. But in South Korean, the situation is getting better, only a few cases last month. They started the new league season last month. However, the organization said that it's not completely safe for spectators come to the league watching the games. The league started without spectators. The fans were unhappy about that. Some fans came to the stadiums watched the games through the barriers. The organization made the fake fans wearing masks to cover the seats. The home-team set the message board let fans can remotely join the game. Comment-------------- That was a good way to start a new league without any risks. During this bad situation, the games can start is some exciting things for fans, even can only watch it online. Also, it's a good thing for athletes and leagues. If they don't have any matches for a long time, maybe it won't get much income to run the league. But the fake fans wearing masks looks too weird for me...hahaha
10 มิถุนายน 2020
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Visiting my city The best season to visit my city is in summer or fall, the weather will be very nice but also very hot. You should avoid coming in spring or winter, the weather is terrible that raining all the time. I would recommend going to the beach and enjoy the sunlight. If you are not a "sunny guy", you can find the cafe just next to the beach. The cafe servers very nice meals also has a great view of the ocean! In the evening, you can go to the night market feeling the Taiwanese culture also tasting Taiwanese traditional food.
4 มิถุนายน 2020
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Vivi's vacation in a small village It's a story about Vivi's vacation in the winter last year. In that week, Vivi stayed in a cozy hotel in the small quiet village with the enjoyment of tranquility with her two friends. But tonight was a little different. When they came back to the hotel from the dinner and heard something rather noisy inside their room. They were scared to open the door and Vivi want to the counter to ask for help, then they came back and opened the door the light illuminate all the room immdiately. In that moment "Oh my god!" they cried together. The room was all messy, everything dropped down to the floor, and the window was broken rather than open and the snow though into the room and rather cold. No one in the room, someone or something had escaped. They initial scared was soon replaced by anger and one of her friends started to cry despite herself. Vivi quickly checked everything in the room especially the safe in the wardrobe. Fortunately, nothing valuable was missing.
17 เมษายน 2020
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About my home and after work This urban development has been very fast and to become bigger day by day. I lived in a cozy cottage near the forest in the edge of the residential area on the outskirts of this huge city, that's why I need to take a bus for an hour to downtown to work every weekday, it's far away from my home, but the pros are privacy and the scenery is beautiful. In the office, I'm responsible for all of the first-class mail. I work very hard and always can be able to complete them before 5 p.m. When I leave the office I don't go home at once instead I go to the fitness center, just near my office, to do the workout. Sometimes I don't want to go to the fitness, I take a stroll on the center street there always have a lot of interesting things happened. At night, the street lights illuminate the center street. In the middle of the street, there stands a heritage monument likes a clown and a lot of people like it, unfortunately, the Cityhall announced it will be removed on the after next month. Occasionally, I go to the bar on the next street of my office with my best workmate. She always orders different kinds of beer every time. She really loves beer, I remember one year ago, she said she wanted to finish all kinds of beer in this bar, but she doesn't achieve until now, that's why we always come to this bar. I don't like beer so I always order papaya milkshake that is my favorite drink here. I think papaya milkshake complements my food perfectly.
15 เมษายน 2020
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Weekday On weekdays, I always set my alarm at 6:45 a.m. than get up at 7 a.m. and eat breakfast, such as bread, jam, yogurt, and cereals, with newspaper to catch up on the news. At 8:20 a.m., I bring my lunch, that I make the night before, and go to take the bus to school. The class starts at 9:00 a.m. until 3:30 p.m., between the classes we have lunchtime at 12:00 to 12:30 p.m. I eat lunch with my friends. When I finish school, I like to take a stroll in the park, up to the hill to see the city view, it's very relaxed. I go home at 6:00 p.m. But sometimes I go to a bar with my friends, especially Wednesdays and Fridays, because Wednesdays always have happy hours for chicken wings, and Fridays always have a party. If I go to the bar, I will go home late. At night, I do my homework after that, I watch Netflix or some English book until 10:00 p.m. I take a shower before going to bed at 11:00 p.m..
15 เมษายน 2020
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