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A letter to a tutor in a university of Australia. Please help me rewrite it, thank you !
Dear Ms Sue Lim,
Hello, this is Zhe Cong from Dalian, China. I greatly appreciate your constant support and guidance. Actually I think I have some difficulties with accepting the offer. I am going to study for a master course in the University of Newcastle. I have already received the offer, and I accept it. I am very eager for the study in Newcastle to begin.
But right now, I cannot satisfy some part of the entrance requirement. In fact, I have some problem with handing in my bachelor’s degree certificate and graduation certificate. At this moment, I have certainly passed all the courses and exams of my studying in Dalian Maritime University. I have finished my graduation thesis and graduation oral examination. I have completed all the things in Maritime University, actually I have already graduated, and got a bachelor’s degree. But our school will hand out our graduation certificate to us in Jan 15th 2014,
and the bachelor’s degree certificate in July 2014. However, according to the offer, my language course will start at Feb 19th 2014, and I must provide these two certificates. That means maybe I will not be admitted this time. But you know, I eagerly look forward to continue my studies in Newcastle. Right now, I have no course to study and no work to do, so I don’t want to wait anymore, because it is a time wasted. And the only problem is time.
I want to entreat a favor of you, dear Ma’am. Could you please postpone the deadline of handing in these two certificates? Would you please grant my entrance without these two certificates temporarily? And I promise I will hand in my graduation certificate before January 20th 2014 and bachelor’s degree certificate before August 2014, otherwise, you can stop my study in Newcastle anytime.
I’m 24 years old, and I have no time to waste. Please! Thank you!
Yours sincerely
Zhe Cong
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It is an IELTS writing test, the topic request is very long, so I write it below.
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
( Welcome correct my essay, and please say something about it,or give me some advice,and I will be really grateful, thank you! )
The importance of improving public health has been realized by more and more people these years. It has been suggested that more sport facilities should be built, by some citizens, while some opponents believe that only by this strategy cannot be useful.
It is no doubt that one's fitness relies on exercises, and increasing the number of sports facilities would provide more places doing sport. People will probably be able to do exercises near their homes or workplaces. If this plan has done, not only office workers and students, but also many retired citizens would have much more chances participating in many different kinds of sports, besides exercises would become more interesting and more lively, because people will never choose running or jogging as their only physical training program.
There are, however, some lacks. In many cases, lots of people are in bad health conditions, that does not associate with lacking of sport equipment. Unhealthy eating habit for instance, causes fat, sleeping too late activates the potential cancer cells, and being addicted to smoking or drinking leads to many cardiovascular diseases and so on. These Health problem cannot be solved only by increasing the number of sport facilities.
Moreover, even if more facilities are built, no one can guarantee that people will do much more sports than before. Many people still do not do sports very often for different reasons.
In conclusion, by adding sport equipment to encourage citizens do more exercises can never be wrong, but by just one sort of measure is too insufficient to improve the public health.
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寻找语言伙伴 I'm need a language partner.
大家好,我是Victor,我非常学习英语,但是苦于在中国没有语言环境,希望遇到一个正在学习中文的native English Speaker,一起学习外语。
Hello everybody, this is Victor, and I'm from China. I like learning English very much, but there is no chance for me to speak English in daily life, so I hope to meet a language partner on italki.
Please follow my italki
Thank you!
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Hi everybody, I'm new here, and I want to learn some English, and Mandarin is my native language.
Hello everyone! My name is Zhe Cong, just call me Victor, and I like learning English, because I think English is an elegant language. I would like someone to speak English with me. Can you help me ?
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I lose a friend.
I had a very good English "teacher" on italki, it just right now, she told me that she would not give me a lesson anymore, and she probably would not use italki any longer.
We have just met one time on Skype, we means nothing to each other, but now I feel terrible grieved unreasonably, maybe you think I was ridiculous, and even I did not know why.Maybe it's because I'm a little emotional, when I thought I would never see a friend any longer I feel sad, or perhaps it is due to she is my only language partner on italki, anyway, I have no idea.
Right now, it's time for our second lesson, but that will never come. I should take a lesson at this time ,but now I have nothing to do, so I can only write something. I really wish to find a new language partner as soon as possible.
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Be careful with your English name.
One of my classmates is called Kitty, because she likes the cartoon character of "Hello Kitty". Our teacher tells her "Kitty" is not a good name for a girl and to remember to get another one when she goes abroad.
Recently, I have watched several American soap operas, and I've got a new finding. That is "Dick" ,which is an English name, and it also means something, I know the meaning, an organ of a male or a male animal. I think it's funny, I know several Dick in my university. But it is unimaginable to me that Dick is also the name of a US ex-vice president. Why? How do people feel when a person tells that his name is Dick?
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I think English is more and more difficult to me.
I have learnt English for over 10 years, actually, I began to learnt English 17 years ago. When I was a primary student, my mother take me to some extracurricular English class every weekend. At that time I was able to communicate with English speakers fluently with some simple sentences. Although I did not have abundant vocabularies and made mistakes constantly, I could say what I want to say in English , and those English speakers usually understood what I say clearly.
Six-year elementary school life passed away, then I went to secondary school. There we started to learnt the so-called grammar,everyday, the voice of our English teacher loitered in the classroom, " 'help somebody to do something'(bla bla bla and so on) I would like you to recite this phrase, and I will test you tomorrow morning ' We recited those grammar points day by day, and we had no chance to speak English any more.
Right now I am a senior college student, I have not study English for about four years.I thought I would not have a relationship with English any more. Shortly after that, I found I was wrong, there will be a good learning and job opportunity for me in Australia, that means I will study abroad and have a good chance to work there later, unfortunately, I have to start learning English again.
Today, my ex-girlfriend made a me phone call from America ( She have studied in the USA for five year, and she went there after graduated for senior high school.At that time I did not go with her , that is why we broke up.) Her English is splendid as a foreign English speaker in my opinion. Due to I will have a IELTS exam in 27th of this month, I suggested to talk in English, but immediately I regreted, I found I could hardly come up with even one word when she asked me except "yes", "yeah" , "no" and "nope". My poor English restricted my description very much and I felt disgraced.Although she did not laugh at me at all, but I still could not relax.
Why? Was it because of my lacking vocabularies? I remember that someone has told me a few uneducated native speakers know less than 2000 words which would not influence their daily life at all. But why cannot I? Anyway, let it go.I believe that I still need more practices and more hard works. At this moment, some wards which said by a orator of the Ted that crosses my mind "Do it , and trust yourself! "
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How can I call a IELTS speaking examiner, when I do not know his/her name?
I understand that Americans often say "sir" or "madam" , and what about British men and Australians?
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I have sent several messages to some native speakers, but there is not any reply. Why?
I have sent several messages to some native speakers, but there is not any reply. Was it because I was not polite enough or the Chinese government has shielded this website?
I would like some foreigners to answer me please. Can you see me? and can you hear from me?
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