There are many different types of music in the world today. - There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? --> There are many different types of music in the world such as pop, R&B, rock, rock and roll, classic, jazz... and each country always has traditional music. From many years ago and until now, music like an entertainment tool which you can relax after a busy day or hardworking. Music can make your soul feel better and fresher. Sometimes music seems like a magical treatment for the human. And a question is mentioned, " Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?". It will not be easy to answer is yes or no. My essay will discuss both sides if this controversial issue. Firstly, the answer is yes for this issue. Traditional music of a country is important because my country, Vietnam many children grow up with lullabies from their mother and grandmother that make they easy sleep with gentle melody. Throughout traditional music is a special part of a country that tells apart with other countries and also is their pride. Traditional music of a country helps people deeply understand history of country and comprehend hero's sacrifices for country. Secondly, with the answer is no. there are many reasons can explain this answer, many young people like international music a lot because it is very popular and noisier such as pop, rock music.Moreover, young people is easy effected by international music. It seems like trend fashion and that make they want to catch up with new music. In some case, when you are in event of youth, they often turn on new music particularly international music than traditional music. Some coffee store and mall they also do like that. There are both pros and cons. It will depend on your attitude and situation to answer this question. However, traditional music should be maintained and keep. Please help me correct my essay. Thank you so much!

笑いたいこと 私の両親は私に「赤ちゃんに生まれるとき、泣くことは初めてことをします。そして、赤ちゃん、成人していするとき、多くのことがあったり、笑ったり、泣いたりしました。だから、あなたもです。」と言いました。生活の中で、だれでも色々なことが笑いたいです。 私にとって笑いたいことの方が泣きたいことより多います。私が見た時私の友達は酔っていました。私は本当に笑いたいことです。私の友達は酔っていった時、歌を歌った利、笑ったり、泣いたりしました。そして、私に色々なことを話したか、彼女の秘密を聞くことができました。しかし、寝た下後で、彼女はぜんぜん覚えませんでした。彼女は恥ずかしかったで、皆に「ごめんなさい。」と言いました。 私と親友にあまり会っていません、私の親友は南部と中部に勉強していますから。だから、私達は夏休みと旧正月に会うことができます。私と親友はいろいろなに話をしました。その時、私と親友は、学校に行くの頃と子供の頃について色々なことを話してくれました。私達は子供の頃と学校に行くの時について話したはいつも笑いたいです。例えば、私達は子供の夢ついてはなしました。私達は先生やアストロソートでや王女でや大統領やクックなどになりたいかったです。それは子供の夢の思うことについて考えることは面白かったです。私達は１２年生の時、初めて学校を避けましたで、カラオケへ歌いに行きましたで、楽しかったです。その後、私たちは叱責されました。

私の理想 あなたは快挙を遂げたいの時、沢山勉強をしなければなりません。でも、これは十分ではありません。あなたは理想も必要です。私はとって理想は生活の意図です。私の理想は幸福です。 私は小学生の時、「理想と夢は同じです」と思います。ですから、私は先生になりたいです。私は学生に知識を教えられます。 私は項が高校生の時、ビジネスマンにたりたいです。私はビジネスマンになったら、沢山お金を稼げます。そして、私は沢山ビジネスマンの本を読みました。しかし、今、私はビジネスマンを勉強しません。私は大学に入った時、私の友達は私に「あなたの理想は何ですか。」を聞きます。これは本当に難問です。それから、私の回答は幸福です。私はとってに新しい語を勉強する幸福ですか、ボランティア参加します。皆は幸せな時、私も幸せです。私は「幸福は単純なことです。」と思います。私は卒業した後で、留学したいです。そして、私は親手当に寄せない時、経済的に自立することできます。

ベトナムの食べ物 旅人は「ベトナムは食べ物の極楽でした。バインミーからフォーに春巻きにベトナムの食べ物は本当に美味しいです」と言いました。しかし、ベトナムの食べ物のキャラクターと中部のキャラクターと南部のキャラクターは違います。 北部ではハノイの食べ物は有名です。北部の食べ物は少し味が薄いで、あまり辛くないです。フォやチャーカーラボンやフォクオンなどは有名な北部の料理です。 中部の食べ物はもっと辛くて、濃い味があります。そして、ここで、色々な醤油があいります。醤油は海老から粗油を作ってがあります。中部では、ワエの食べ物は有名です。ブンボーフエはヌードルと牛肉とサラダがあります。そして、ブンボーフエは辛くて、濃くてすっぱいな味があります。これに、チェーワエがとても美味しいです。 南部の食べ物は中国食のべ物とカンボジアの食べ物とタイの食べ物の影響を受けていましたので、南部の食べ物はもっと甘くて、辛い味があります。カインチュアはベトナムの南部のメコンデルタ地域の格別なスープです。カインチュアはタマリンドやメコンデルタ川やトマトやパイナップル矢パックチなどから作ってがあります。これに、バンセオやゴイなどがあります。

How to use preposition はand が?

I'm confuseing はwith が.

When I wrote about topic, I made mistake about that.can someone explain ?

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Introduce 私はイゥイエンです。 二十歳です。 大学生です。 日本語を勉強したい。 どうぞよろしくおねがいしはす。

My life I'm Tuyen. I'm a student and my major is agricultural economics. Now I'm living in ha noi which is capital of Vietnam. Hanoi is diffirent from where I lived. Hanoi is so noisy and air is pollutes, because there are so many vehicles specially motorcycle. However, I really like view 36 streets and districts which is called " Pho co" ( formerly Hanoi ). I like sitting to see Hoan Kiem lake. In additionThe dishes are delicious and strange such as "bun cha", "bun ca" , " pho cuan", shrimp cake, pillow cake ( banh goi)...and Trang Tien ice-cream which I can eat it all season. Somtimes I like taking photo about things, trees and people in here. Oneday if you go to Hanoi, i will be become tourguide for you.

Gender topic You know discrimination is serious proplem. It is not only happens in the past , but aslo it is happening in the present. Firstly, in the past with patriarchal ideology of feudalistic societies, man always thinking they are bread-winner ,and woman must stay at home and child-rearing and child-bearing . Woman want one day they will do something original and free. Now days, with the development of economy, gender discrimination is limited. Both man and woman have ambitious careers because they want have a brighter future. In addition, male-dominated societies no longer exist, so woman can pursue higher education and hold high position in society. Secondly, In modern family both mother and father share responsibility with together in bringing up children. Besides, in single-mother families, women is always fore-sighted and self-reliant economic foundation to bring up children. Society welcomes egalitarian approach because of enfranchise woman . However, man impose backward ideas on women, they give that thier wife are slave . That is cause of domestic violence, so thier children will follow suit them .Moreover, children can be lured into social evils, thier parents shun away family responsibility and only take care of thier career.

History topic You know history is the past of each country. It help you understand the sacrifice of ancestors and see heroic actions. But there are many information can be distorted and mistake, you must revise the past and have a better understanding of the truth. In the past, wars were more happened because emperors want expand thier colony. That aroused in people bias and hatred against other nations and adversely affected relationship between nations. To avoid happening wars and maintain peaceful relationship between nations, the goverment had has negotiations .But now, to enhance position of nation, they are starting arm races and using nuclear weapons. This is cause political tensions. Many international organizations protested the wars and took actions to prevent wars .Many people suffered and witnessed barbaric actions and cruel hearts of fight teams. so they felt hatred for the enemy. so that the life is better, they should forget the past and look forward to a better future. Now days, to glorify the image and heroic actions, the governments built statue to remember thier actions. In addition, many producers were recreate historical events into the films, so you can witness the sacrifice of predecessor in an effort to protect nations. And if you want nurture the dream of becoming historians, you should find reliable reference and study hard-working.. You can introduce about your historical relics of country that appeal to tourist by historical sight-seeing So as you can see, history is a part important, you need know and understand it. Please correct for me ! Could you mind if you give a comment in my entry? Thank you so much !